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Originally Posted by SubZero
Congrats Piyush.
I just read that you got a 6.0 in AWA. That's another feather to an already studded cap. I saw your template and it looks pretty good. I have carved out a template based on many templates floating around. You had mentioned that you have written about 9 paras for both Analysis & Argument. Does that mean that you have written 7 body para plus 1 opening and 1 closing para ? How do you write your paras ?
Will the following structure work for 5+ score ? I kinda find it odd to use the terms... firstly... secondly... seventhly etc.
The argument.... (opening para)
Firstly...
Secondly...
Thirdly...
...
...
Seventhly...
The argument.... (closing para)
Appreciate your help. |
yup.. my 9 paras included the opening and closing para.
As far as things are concerned about the middle paragraphs ,I didnt got by firstly , secondly, etc. I approached them like a genereal para .. for eg..
para 1: The first assumption on which the argument is based ...
para 2: Looking deeper into the argument, we also find that ...
para 3: Though the argument suggest ..... using the figures ..., it doesnot really reflect upon the ...
para 4: The assumption that ..... also suffers from a fallacy in that it does not consider...
para5: Though looking from the author point, .... indeed managed to shed a light on the current trends of ..... , however, the same can not be said about the future, especially in these competitive scenarios where change in consumer taste is difficult to predict..
.. and so on..
Enjoy
AWA during test. You will love it !