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hi nitika,
Good essay there. I somehow feel you have holistically dealt with one point (what kinda crimes must be punished with what intensity) with thy 2,3,4 paras augumenting for the 5th para, with a conclusion in 6th para. This could be acceptable, but actually I thought we were required to come up with more discrete points than just hone in on one. Well this's just whats in my mind. What say you???
and hey, would you please say something abt my story before expressing your views. That way I would learn better where I'm going out of place.
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