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hi xaero!
actually i read thy essay before but couldnt follow it.
actually i feel u r hiding beneath a lofty vocab. though that is what i consider thy best point usually.
in para 1 usage of 'generic'??i im not sure if its right.its-related to a genre or group.is 'generic trait' ok?i have just heard about generic art.
in para 2 usage of-apprehended is not clear.its meant to be feared?just check out.
in 2nd last para-amelioration i think is used with of i.e. amelioration of a disease.
anyway,i think u r better at vocab. than me,so correct me wherever necessary-i might also learn.
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