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xaero · 10-02-2002, 10:23 AM

Hi Nitika,

Hey, Whats the big idea? - some half-eaten writing, followed by a HUGE gap and a message again? :-)

Anyway, I just wanted to know how I could've improved my 3rd para? Isnt it sufficiently expressive? I intend to discuss the vast differences in salaries between the software professionals and other jobbers, causing a feeling of lowness among the latter and uppishness and pomposity among the former, causing rifts in society.

Please comment.

10-02-2002, 10:23 AM	#6 (permalink)
xaero Within my grasp! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: India Posts: 227	Hi Nitika, Hey, Whats the big idea? - some half-eaten writing, followed by a HUGE gap and a message again? :-) Anyway, I just wanted to know how I could've improved my 3rd para? Isnt it sufficiently expressive? I intend to discuss the vast differences in salaries between the software professionals and other jobbers, causing a feeling of lowness among the latter and uppishness and pomposity among the former, causing rifts in society. Please comment.