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Ghaji · 03-10-2008, 04:15 PM

CAN ANYONE PLS EVALUATE MY ESSAY. IT WILL BE HELPFUL FOR ME. I AM TAKING MY TEST ON MARCH 14TH. THANKS IN ADVANCE.

You have recently inherited a significant sum of money with the stipulation that you must donate half of the sum to a charity. To what sort of charity would you give your money? why? Use SRE.

It is very pathetic to think about a life in which there is none to take care of us. And that too a life without parents, our creators is so miserable. In my opinion, I wish to donate money for the orphanage homes. According to me, there is someone to look after the other kind of charities such as old age homes, cancer society, and pet animal homes. I mean that there is someone to rely on for emotional support. But the orphans are deprived of homes, parents and all sorts of relationship.
Moreover, I am blessed with good parents who take of me and give me whatever I ask for. Sometimes I may disobey them without knowing their value. When I am 12 years old I asked them for a dress which is very expensive. In that time, they had more expenses like mortgage, family expenditure and education. So they asked me to wait. But I am very stubborn in my demand and did not accept their words. My parents took me to the orphanage home and showed me the people who do not know who their parents are. That incident opened my insight I realised my mistake. My intuition asked me with whom these people might ask for their demand. This particular incident had a great impact in my mind.
Even though money cannot pay for the human relationship, I think this little amount can help them to fulfil their basic needs. When I was in the school, I got an opportunity to visit an orphanage home. I spent a day with those children, while talking with them I came to know, how they miss their parents. From that day I had a desire in my mind to help them. Since I was studying that time I cannot help them with money. So I used to help them with their studies by teaching them math and giving them my old books. I try to give an emotional support for them. Now I think it’s a good opportunity to serve them and make them happy.
However, the money cannot replace their parents love and care I presume that this money would certainly help them to meet their needs. Furthermore, it can give them a feeling that there is someone to take care and thereby they can forget their worries.
Hence I utterly, think that donation has more value when it is given to the charity homes like this. People who run the charity homes are like God. It certainly needs more patient and dedication because sometimes we may be annoyed when our children trouble us. But those people who take care of the homes show their true love and passion towards their job. So I think this money not only helps the children but also give a hand to the people who run it. Also, I personally feel happy and mind my mind is more relaxed. I wholeheartedly, donate money for the orphanage homes.

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Ghaji Trying to make mom and pop proud Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 8	CAN ANYONE PLS EVALUATE MY ESSAY. IT WILL BE HELPFUL FOR ME. I AM TAKING MY TEST ON MARCH 14TH. THANKS IN ADVANCE. You have recently inherited a significant sum of money with the stipulation that you must donate half of the sum to a charity. To what sort of charity would you give your money? why? Use SRE. It is very pathetic to think about a life in which there is none to take care of us. And that too a life without parents, our creators is so miserable. In my opinion, I wish to donate money for the orphanage homes. According to me, there is someone to look after the other kind of charities such as old age homes, cancer society, and pet animal homes. I mean that there is someone to rely on for emotional support. But the orphans are deprived of homes, parents and all sorts of relationship. Moreover, I am blessed with good parents who take of me and give me whatever I ask for. Sometimes I may disobey them without knowing their value. When I am 12 years old I asked them for a dress which is very expensive. In that time, they had more expenses like mortgage, family expenditure and education. So they asked me to wait. But I am very stubborn in my demand and did not accept their words. My parents took me to the orphanage home and showed me the people who do not know who their parents are. That incident opened my insight I realised my mistake. My intuition asked me with whom these people might ask for their demand. This particular incident had a great impact in my mind. Even though money cannot pay for the human relationship, I think this little amount can help them to fulfil their basic needs. When I was in the school, I got an opportunity to visit an orphanage home. I spent a day with those children, while talking with them I came to know, how they miss their parents. From that day I had a desire in my mind to help them. Since I was studying that time I cannot help them with money. So I used to help them with their studies by teaching them math and giving them my old books. I try to give an emotional support for them. Now I think it’s a good opportunity to serve them and make them happy. However, the money cannot replace their parents love and care I presume that this money would certainly help them to meet their needs. Furthermore, it can give them a feeling that there is someone to take care and thereby they can forget their worries. Hence I utterly, think that donation has more value when it is given to the charity homes like this. People who run the charity homes are like God. It certainly needs more patient and dedication because sometimes we may be annoyed when our children trouble us. But those people who take care of the homes show their true love and passion towards their job. So I think this money not only helps the children but also give a hand to the people who run it. Also, I personally feel happy and mind my mind is more relaxed. I wholeheartedly, donate money for the orphanage homes. vbrep_register("562845")