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nanunem_d12 · 2008 September 5th, 05:12 PM

@Ruchia.. Nice essay buddy.

But I am not the write one who can judge you as I have just started preparing for it.
Also, people I have added my essay as well, and would appreciate if you all can give me some feedback on it. This is my first AWA Argument writeup.

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The study says that the scent in lavender flowers cures insomnia. The finding indeed can be useful in treating insomnia, but taking it as a complete, quick and permanent remedy for curing insomnia can be an incorrect notion.

First of all, the study involved a set of mere 30 volunteers who were monitored to lead to the final conclusion. It is possible that if the same research is carried out with a larger set of people, the finding may differ from the former one.

Secondly, the three weeks period cannot be ascertained as appropriate and ideal for such a finding. This study if done for a longer period of time can give us different results.

Thirdly, the controlled conditions as mentioned can also be a vital factor behind the results. It is possible that the conditions and surroundings in which the subjects slept may had some effects which helped them to have a sound sleep in the later weeks.

Also, as the medicine was discontinued in the second week which resulted in less sound sleep, we cannot directly gauge it's reaction time period. It can range from a short time of few hours to few days. So, it can likely be also a driving factor behind the sound sleep in the third week.

Therefore, considering these points we can say that lavender leaves can be useful in curing insomnia, but it will be better if we revise our study into a more comprehensive one with a larger number of subjects and try to find out all possible reasons behind the effectiveness of this reasearch and its findings.
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Thanks for looking.

2008 September 5th, 05:12 PM	#8 (permalink)
nanunem_d12 I JUST got here. Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Delhi, India Posts: 20	@Ruchia.. Nice essay buddy. But I am not the write one who can judge you as I have just started preparing for it. Also, people I have added my essay as well, and would appreciate if you all can give me some feedback on it. This is my first AWA Argument writeup. Starts:--> The study says that the scent in lavender flowers cures insomnia. The finding indeed can be useful in treating insomnia, but taking it as a complete, quick and permanent remedy for curing insomnia can be an incorrect notion. First of all, the study involved a set of mere 30 volunteers who were monitored to lead to the final conclusion. It is possible that if the same research is carried out with a larger set of people, the finding may differ from the former one. Secondly, the three weeks period cannot be ascertained as appropriate and ideal for such a finding. This study if done for a longer period of time can give us different results. Thirdly, the controlled conditions as mentioned can also be a vital factor behind the results. It is possible that the conditions and surroundings in which the subjects slept may had some effects which helped them to have a sound sleep in the later weeks. Also, as the medicine was discontinued in the second week which resulted in less sound sleep, we cannot directly gauge it's reaction time period. It can range from a short time of few hours to few days. So, it can likely be also a driving factor behind the sound sleep in the third week. Therefore, considering these points we can say that lavender leaves can be useful in curing insomnia, but it will be better if we revise our study into a more comprehensive one with a larger number of subjects and try to find out all possible reasons behind the effectiveness of this reasearch and its findings. Ends here Thanks for looking.