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leyan · 2009 June 22nd, 04:47 PM

Everybody who much know in IELTS rules can grade my essay. I just want to know which level I reached ?

The advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective media.

- comics
- books
- radio
- television
- film
- theatre

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, it is obvious that media have been using as the important role in communication all over the world. Most people usually exploit those devices, such as radio, television and film, for getting information. All of our informations will be shared to others by using these media.

Some people seem that they would easy to take radio everywhere and they can listen to the up-to-date news anytime. Although, radio could give updated informations for them, their minds have not satisfied upon it. So, television is becoming the most attractive thing for them because they can listen the voices and watch the pictures at the same time that they think they can easy to understand the informations on TV. Furthermore, books are one of the interested media to communicate information, for example, the person who knew the parts of knowledge, he can share his knowledge to another person by lending his books or point to buy the books.

On the other hand, disadvantages will be followed together with advantages, therefore, there has so many disadvantages on each devices. Both of radio and television cannot accept frequencies at remote areas and if the electricity cannot support for them, there may be applied them. Thus, we cannot gather informations in those circumstances. Also, books have some disadvantages, for example, wrong ideas, imitate creations, time lated news and so on. These might be interfered in collecting informations.

In conclusion, people need to choose the most effective media for future. It has long been my belief that television is the suitable thing for collecting informations. We can look and listen about latest news, culture, traditions, sociality and so many things on TV in these days without any troubles. Therefore, I strongly believe that we should choose television to communicate informations.

(299 words)

2009 June 22nd, 04:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
leyan Trying to pass the IELTS Join Date: May 2009 Location: Yangon, Myanmar Posts: 7	Need to grade my Writing Task 2. Everybody who much know in IELTS rules can grade my essay. I just want to know which level I reached ? The advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective media. - comics - books - radio - television - film - theatre Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Nowadays, it is obvious that media have been using as the important role in communication all over the world. Most people usually exploit those devices, such as radio, television and film, for getting information. All of our informations will be shared to others by using these media. Some people seem that they would easy to take radio everywhere and they can listen to the up-to-date news anytime. Although, radio could give updated informations for them, their minds have not satisfied upon it. So, television is becoming the most attractive thing for them because they can listen the voices and watch the pictures at the same time that they think they can easy to understand the informations on TV. Furthermore, books are one of the interested media to communicate information, for example, the person who knew the parts of knowledge, he can share his knowledge to another person by lending his books or point to buy the books. On the other hand, disadvantages will be followed together with advantages, therefore, there has so many disadvantages on each devices. Both of radio and television cannot accept frequencies at remote areas and if the electricity cannot support for them, there may be applied them. Thus, we cannot gather informations in those circumstances. Also, books have some disadvantages, for example, wrong ideas, imitate creations, time lated news and so on. These might be interfered in collecting informations. In conclusion, people need to choose the most effective media for future. It has long been my belief that television is the suitable thing for collecting informations. We can look and listen about latest news, culture, traditions, sociality and so many things on TV in these days without any troubles. Therefore, I strongly believe that we should choose television to communicate informations. (299 words)