Less Kindness n concern for others when electronic things are appeared. Opinion on AGREE.
Today is the day when we step to a new world which build with latest technologies. So, everybody seem to have more and more possessions, such as, electronic entertainments, domestic machinery, office tools, etc. That is why they don't have time to help others where as they spend their everyday lives for making money.
One of the report of United Nations, most of the people who live around the world have been spending all of their times to make money. Therefore, they have not spare time to worry for others who are less any chances than them. Even though, the man who perfect in money at his life, also do not want to use his times to help someone, because every time he thinks how he can get more money from others. There is evidence to suggest that some of electric machines are being approach to lack humanity. As a result, a person will think everybody can do everything by applying that machines without his activities.
On the other hand, money is the essential part of the human beings. So, they used various methods to make money cruelly. While, they have been finding money in such ways, the criminal records are increased significantly day after day. Because, they need to fill the gaps of their lives by using money, how poor they are. For instance, they may worry that they would have less freedom and social in their lives. This would have a large negative impact on society.
So, in conclusion, I feel strongly that we do not have any chances for concern others when the electronic things arose. Why cannot we make a plan to help everyone ? Firstly, we should decide to help and patient whether we own these things, isn't it ? Eventually, that is up to you, if you want to be a good person, you may have at least one chance to help anyone.
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