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Can some one help me correct this


Anita A

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  • 4 weeks later...

Hi Anita,

 

The way this sentence is written implies that the cold Boston weather has been living in the south. A clearer way to write this would be:

 

Having lived in the south all of my life, I found the cold Boston weather shocking at first.

 

 

I hope this helps!

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