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			<title>Recommendations and Suggestions For Writing</title>
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			<description>*1.) Create Eye-Catching Titles (similar to front-page newspaper article headlines or book titles)*
 Focuses your essay or story
 Captures Point of Essay In A Single Phrase
 Uses Active Voice:
 Highlights the most significant aspect or purpose of your essay, research paper, article or story
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div><b><font color="Blue">1.) Create Eye-Catching Titles (similar to front-page newspaper article headlines or book titles)</font></b><br />
 Focuses your essay or story<br />
 Captures Point of Essay In A Single Phrase<br />
 Uses Active Voice:<br />
 Highlights the most significant aspect or purpose of your essay, research paper, article or story<br />
 Remember to always use a title when writing an essay<br />
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 <font color="Blue"><b>2.) Develop Creative Introductions</b></font><br />
 <b><font color="DarkOrange">General Style</font></b> - Gradually leads the reader to the thesis, the main point of the essay, beginning with background information regarding the topic from general to specific. <br />
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 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Documentary Style</font></b> - Captures the essence of a topic using visual examples (such as movie or video scenes), celebrities, popular or current events, and historical themes while capturing the reader&#8217;s full attention and interest <br />
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 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Narrative Style</font></b> - Begins with a personal statement or thought of moral value, then immediately begins with story, or introduction to the story using visual writing. <br />
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3.) Form A Good Thesis Statement</font></b><br />
 A good thesis is creative and specific, yet manageable. <br />
 It gives the reader an idea of  what to expect from the rest of the paper. <br />
 It addresses both or all sides of an argument, but establishes your unique position on a specific issue or topic of interest. <br />
It is the conclusion you come to based on your research, i.e. analyzing, interpreting, comparing &amp; contrasting, etc. (In other words, do these things BEFORE attempting to create a thesis)<br />
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 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Examples</font></b>: (not mine personally)<br />
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1.) Some people believe that genes strictly affect our way of life, while others believe only our environment affects us. However, research suggests that both genes and environment influence our behavior. <br />
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2.) Some people claim that adolescents are too physically and psychologically immature to cope with the problems of the real world and don&#8216;t believe they should leave university education prematurely. However, they forget one fact: adolescents can vote or start driving at the age of 18 (in some countries even before that age!), which proves that they are considered physically and psychologically mature at that age.<br />
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3.) Supporters of medical treatment argue that medicine should be trusted since it is effective and scientifically proven, however, a new theory argues that healing is at our fingertips--we can be healthy by doing Reiki on a regular basis.<br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">4.) Construct Complete, Concise Sentences: </font></b><br />
 Use Strong Transitions<br />
 Use Active Voice<br />
 Give Visual Examples<br />
 Use Creative Expressions<br />
 Avoid Unnecessary Words and phrases<br />
 Avoid Redundant Words and phrases <br />
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 For examples, Go to: grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/nova/nova11.htm  <br />
 Read the sentences, then click &#8216;Grammar&#8217;s Version&#8217; <br />
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 <font color="Blue"><b><br />
5.) Use Active Voice</b></font><br />
Mostly used in professional writing: journalism, newspapers, news reporting, movie scripting, documentaries, research papers, but you can use this technique to enhance the quality of your own writing. <br />
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Unique writing approach that allows for vivid, creative expression; enhances diction. Helps give your writing its own personal style. <br />
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 Allows the subject of the sentence to perform a specific action which, in turn, allows the reader to &#8220;see&#8221; what is happening<br />
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 <b>Passive verbs</b> tend to limit sentences by using indirect, action-less expressions. <br />
 <b><font color="Red">Passive</font></b>: The mid-October air <font color="Red"><b>was</b></font> chilly, and I <b><font color="Red">was</font></b> glad to be inside the doctor&#8217;s heated clinic for the uninsured working poor.<br />
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 Examples of passive verbs: ccis.edu/departments/Writingcenter/documents/passive.html<br />
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     <b>Active verbs</b>, on the other hand, add creativity, life, and action to sentences by allowing the subject to perform visual actions that keep a reader engaged and entertained. <br />
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 <font color="SeaGreen"><b>Active</b></font>: The mid-October air <b><font color="SeaGreen">rushed</font></b> me into the doctor&#8217;s clinic for poor, uninsured workers. The heat <b><font color="SeaGreen">embraced</font></b> my skin and <b><font color="SeaGreen">soothed</font></b> my shivers. <br />
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To change passive sentences into active sentences, identify who is performing the action, then place the performer of the action in the subject of the sentence: <br />
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 Passive: <b><font color="DarkOrange">The entrance exam</font></b> <b><font color="Red">was</font></b> failed by <b><font color="SeaGreen">over one third of the applicants to the school</font></b>. <br />
 Active : <b><font color="SeaGreen">Over one-third of the applicants to the school</font></b> <b><font color="Blue">failed</font></b> <b><font color="DarkOrange">the entrance exam</font></b>. <br />
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 For more examples, go to: owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/539/1<br />
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     <br />
 <b><font color="Blue">6.) Use Strong Transitions</font></b><br />
Transitions allow for greater cohesion and continuity between sentences and paragraphs which helps your writing flow smoothly, allowing readers to make strong connections for greater comprehension of an entire story, article, or essay. <br />
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 Examples: <br />
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 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Following an evening of indulging entertainment and glamorous fun</font></b>, my friends usually crash at my house for an unofficial sleepover party. <br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">7.) Avoid Redundancy</font></b><br />
 Avoid using redundant words or phrases<br />
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 <b><font color="Red">Redundant</font></b>: Ironically, this <font color="Red">forced religious assimilation</font> that threatened to destroy the Indian&#8217;s culture is the very <font color="Red">religious conversion</font> that the colonists were leaving behind in England.<br />
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 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Concise</font></b>: The same forced assimilation the English colonists fled from now threatened to destroy the Native American culture. <br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">8.) Develop Complete Paragraphs</font></b><br />
 1. Begin with <b><font color="Green">your</font></b> main point.<br />
2. Give visual, distinct, <b><font color="Green">relevant</font></b> examples<br />
3. End with the <b><font color="Green">significance</font></b> or summary of the point.     <br />
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Answer this question as you end: &#8216;So what is the significance of my point?&#8217;<br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">9.) Create Thought Provoking Conclusions</font></b><br />
     Summarize the discussion/argument (thesis) based on discussion<br />
     Critique the author <br />
     Make suggestions<br />
     Offer Solutions to a problem <br />
     Determine the effectiveness of the author&#8217;s point of view <br />
     Include personal thought and insight<br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">10.) Debate/Argumentative Essays checklist </font></b><br />
 <font color="SeaGreen"><b>Present</b></font> The Argument or Debate Effectively<br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Collect</font></b> and State the Facts<br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Express</font></b> the Arguments <br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Convey</font></b> the Benefits and Consequences<br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Use</font></b> Active Voice and Creative Expression<br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Ask</font></b> Profound Questions <br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Give</font></b> Convincing Answers<br />
 <b><font color="SeaGreen">Allude</font></b> to people and events in history<br />
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 <b><font color="Blue">11.) Oral Speech</font></b><br />
 Don't try to memorize an entire speech.  <br />
Instead, List and memorize topics to be discussed<br />
 Use Active Voice<br />
 Show, don&#8217;t just Tell<br />
 Give specific, visual examples of experiences<br />
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12.) If you forget anything...</font></b><br />
 Just remember these three things: <br />
 Tell a good visual story, avoid unnecessary and redundant words or phrases, Use active voice</div>

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