Erin, are you a toefl teacher?

[bahar222]

Honestly, I think it depends a lot on what you feel comfortable with. I think a personal example and a literary example could work really well. Try to avoid repeating the types of examples, e.g., try not to use two personal examples or two literary examples.

Remember, though, that in most cases, it's better to write two somewhat overlapping paragraphs than one unique paragraph. In other words, if you're taking your test, and you can think only of another literary example (and you can't come up with a personal example, then you should just go ahead and write the second, somewhat repetitive, literary example.

Your writing shows a lot of potential, and it looks like you're in pretty good shape, so try not to worry so much.

dear Erin,
are you a toefl teacher. Thanks in advance for your reply. If I misunderstood, please dont mind. regards,

[Erin]

I've split this off from the other thread to keep things organized.

I taught TOEFL preparation for a long time; however, for the last few years I've been teaching SAT prep and a few other things.

Is that what you wanted to know?

[bahar222]

I've split this off from the other thread to keep things organized.

I taught TOEFL preparation for a long time; however, for the last few years I've been teaching SAT prep and a few other things.

Is that what you wanted to know?

yes, I wanted to know if you are stil teaching toefl. ok. thankk you for the answer.

[Erin]

yes, I wanted to know if you are stil teaching toefl. ok. thankk you for the answer.

Nope, I'm not teaching TOEFL right now. Too much stuff to do, unfortunately.