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Old 09-28-2008, 03:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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monkeys were drawn by the artist

With just several quick strokes of the pen,
the monkeys were drawn by the artist,
capturing their antics.

(A) the monkeys were drawn by the artist,
capturing their antics.
(B) the artist sketched the monkeys, capturing
their antics.
(C) the artist captured the antics of the
monkeys, sketching them.
(D) the artist sketched the monkeys and
also capturing their antics.
(E) the monkeys and their antics were
sketched by the artist.
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Old 09-28-2008, 03:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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B it should be.

With just several quick strokes of the pen, the monkeys were drawn by the artist, capturing their antics.
(A) the monkeys were drawn by the artist, capturing their antics. The dependent clause should start with the artist.
(B) the artist sketched the monkeys, capturing their antics. correct
(C) the artist captured the antics of the monkeys, sketching them. Awkward
(D) the artist sketched the monkeys and also capturing their antics. it should be captured to maintain the llism.
(E) the monkeys and their antics were sketched by the artist. Same problem as A
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Old 09-28-2008, 04:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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agree with coolaman..B
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Old 09-29-2008, 07:05 AM   #4 (permalink)
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OA is B
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Old 09-29-2008, 11:33 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Good one!!

Vote for B.
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Old 09-29-2008, 01:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
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IMO B .. i found B and C close .. took some time before i eliminated C

(B) the artist sketched the monkeys, capturing
their antics. ...the artist sketched monkeys in a way to capture the antics ..
(C) the artist captured the antics of the
monkeys, sketching them. --illogically suggests that artist captured antics in a way to sketch them ..

the action indicated by past tense verb and the action indicated by present participle, both happen at the same time ...one after the other .. so the sequence should be logical .. B maintains that sequence


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