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Old 2002 October 14th, 09:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Among the reasons for the decline of New England agriculture in the last three decades were the high cost of land, the pressure of housing and commercial development, and basing a marketing and distribution system on importing produce from Florida and California.

(A) basing a marketing and distribution system on importing produce from Florida and California
(B) basing a marketing and distribution system on the imported produce of Florida and California
(C) basing a system of marketing and distribution on the import of produce from Florida and California
(D) a marketing and distribution system based on importing produce from Florida and California
(E) a marketing and distribution system importing produce from Florida and California as its base

Why Answer is D not B ?


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Old 2002 October 16th, 05:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Among the reasons for the decline of New England agriculture in the last three decades were the high cost of land, the pressure of housing and commercial development, and basing a marketing and distribution system on importing produce from Florida and California.

(A) basing a marketing and distribution system on importing produce from Florida and California
(B) basing a marketing and distribution system on the imported produce of Florida and California
(C) basing a system of marketing and distribution on the import of produce from Florida and California
(D) a marketing and distribution system based on importing produce from Florida and California
(E) a marketing and distribution system importing produce from Florida and California as its base

Why Answer is D not B ?


This is a parallel construction

other sentence starts with

were + (adjective) noun

but underlined portion starts with

were + present participle

moreover

the reason for ... were (is) .... basing a marketing...

seems awkward to me

the reason for ... were (is) .... a marketing and distribution system..

sounds better...

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