I go with C.
"over the decade" is redundant to "In the last ten years".
"has fallen substantially" is the correct form since a present perfect tense needs to be used.
"twice" is adverb and thus "more than doubled" is the correct phrase.
1. In the last ten years, the dropout rate among Black high school students fell substantially over the past decade, while the number of Blacks who attend college is more than twice what it was.
(A) fell substantially over the past decade, while the number of Blacks who attend college is more than twice what it was
(B) fell substantially, while the number of Blacks attending college is more than double what it was at that time
(C) has fallen substantially, while the number of Blacks attending college has more than doubled
(D) has fallen substantially over the past decade, while the number of Blacks attending college is more than twice what it was at that time
(E) has fallen substantially over the past decade, while the number of Blacks who are attending college are more than double what they were
explain thy ans.


(A) "past decade" - redundant.
(B) "what it was at that time" - redundant
(C) my choice
(D) "past decade" - redundant.
(E) "past decade" - redundant.
Official Answer please.
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