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rising marketing demand for fish and seafood


DJValentino

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To meet the rising marketing demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment by nearly half and raising them on special diets.

 

 

A. their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment

B. their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut

C. growing them naturally, cutting their feed allotment

D. they grow naturally, cutting their feed allotment

E. they grow naturally, with their feed allotment cut

 

 

 

OA is

 

My answer is A.

 

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I think C is the right answer. Here is my explanation:

 

To keep the parallelism sentence need "cutting their feed allotment" as second part because third part, which is not in error says "raising them on special diets" and first part again, which is not in error says "growing fish". This means option B & E are eliminated.

 

Now we are left with A, C, & D.

 

In case of A, & D their/them is coming first which leave a dangling link. Because it does not make clear whether their/them is refering to fish or suppliers.

 

That leaves us with C. Although it is not the perfect answer but it looks best among others.

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CrackXam,

 

A. their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment

D. they grow naturally, cutting their feed allotment

 

Suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as their growth rate - incorrect, because the objects X and Y are not the same.You're trying to grow something faster than they normally grow.

 

Suppliers are growing fish at a rate twice as fast as their growth rate - correct.

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