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Old 2008 May 13th, 03:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Five hundred million different species

Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.

A. Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.
B. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.
C. Vanished are nearly 99 percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth.
D. Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.
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E. Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have
appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.

SPOILER: I am confused b/w B & E. They both look fine to me.
Rest are incorrect. Please explain your answer.
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Old 2008 May 13th, 03:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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According to me, E is better

B. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.


E. Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.
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Old 2008 May 13th, 04:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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IMO answer is B.

@manas: Creatures appeared in past so B is correct.

@scorpian: OA please.
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Old 2008 May 13th, 04:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Looks B to me as well.
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Old 2008 May 13th, 05:46 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I would go with E -

B. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.

the colored portion of sentence is a bit ambiguous bcoz , it can mean either "99 % of 500 million species that appeared on earth"
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"500 million species appeared on earth ,and out of that 99% of species disappeared"

hence "the" was required after "Nearly 99 percent of"

hope i am making myself clear !!

E. Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.

quite clear ..
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Old 2008 May 13th, 06:04 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Even I feel its either B or E.
But sentence start of B is bit akward.
So i go with E
What is OA ?
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Old 2008 May 13th, 07:23 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I would say B. What's the OA?
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Old 2008 May 13th, 07:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Agree with khushi explanation...answer should be E
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Old 2008 May 14th, 03:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Looks like we are split between B and E. What's the OA?
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Old 2008 May 14th, 04:31 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Thnx for explanation. This is a disputed one. As per set, OA is B, but experts think that OA should be E.

As explained above by you guys, OA should be E.
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