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Old 05-18-2008, 06:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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double-digit unemployment

According to some economists, Japan is in danger of plunging into a depression that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain a society that regards lifetime employment as a virtual right of citizenship.
(A) that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain
(B) that, because of double-digit unemployment, could be a severe strain for
(C) with double-digit unemployment, and it could severely strain
(D) with double-digit unemployment and could be a severe strain
(E) with double-digit unemployment and could severely strain


Please let me know the line of reasoning and answer
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Old 05-18-2008, 07:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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IMO A.

This question has 20 day cycle to get posted here.
and "A" is correct everytime.

(A) that, with double-digit unemployment, could severely strain Correct
(B) that, because of double-digit unemployment, could be a severe strain for. redundant & wordy
(C) with double-digit unemployment, and it could severely strain "it" has ambiguos referrant
(D) with double-digit unemployment and could be a severe strain "on" is missing after strain
(E) with double-digit unemployment and could severely strain "Japan" could severely strain???? .....just wrong
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Old 05-18-2008, 02:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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IMO ans is A.

@nick: OA please.
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Old 05-18-2008, 05:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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OA is A. I chose D, but now i see "it" had ambiguous referrent.
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:23 AM   #5 (permalink)
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b- changes meaning
c-it - pronoun reference error
d-sentence fragment
e-parallelism issue
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Old 05-19-2008, 05:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi scorpion.ks ,

Can plz explain why A is better than B .. i stil din get it .. I chose B .. thanks in advance
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Old 05-20-2008, 01:20 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hi scorpion.ks ,

Can plz explain why A is better than B .. i stil din get it .. I chose B .. thanks in advance
Khushi,

I eliminated B, since,

1) "B" has "be a" - hence passive. (GMAT avoid it)
2) "B" is wordy - (GMAT like conciseness)

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Old 05-20-2008, 09:35 AM   #8 (permalink)
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hi scorpion, i agree with your reasons for eliminating B; however, doesnt B change the intended meaning, using 'because'? please throw some light.
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Old 05-20-2008, 01:01 PM   #9 (permalink)
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hi scorpion, i agree with your reasons for eliminating B; however, doesnt B change the intended meaning, using 'because'? please throw some light.
May be you are right. I think B is free for interpretation.

If we disect them,
A is : depression with unemp -> strain a society
and
B is : depression (provided unemp) -> strain a society
but depression (NO unemp) may not be a strain a society

Is that what you meant by "changing the meaning"?
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Old 05-20-2008, 01:04 PM   #10 (permalink)
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And btw what is the right idiom "strain for" or "strain on"?

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