Go Back   TestMagic Forums > Test preparation > GMAT > GMAT Verbal > GMAT Sentence Correction
Register FAQForum Rules Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 06-13-2008, 02:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
kishugoel
Eager!
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 46
kishugoel just joined TestMagic.
media...

Q. Analyzing campaign expenditures, the media has had as a focus the high costs and low ethics of campaign finance, but they have generally overlooked the cost of actually administering elections, which includes facilities, transport, printing, staffing, and technology.
A. Analyzing campaign expenditures, the media has had as a focus
B. Analyses of campaign expenditures by the media has been focus on
C. In analyzing campaign expenditures, the media have focused on
D. Media analyses of campaign expenditures have had as a focus
E. In their analysis of campaign expenditures, the media has been focusing on
kishugoel is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 04:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
alexandro
Eager!
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 94
alexandro just joined TestMagic.
i go with D
media analyses - plural and 'they" refers to plural
b awkward
c the media have....
d ok 4 me
E in their analysis ....,

oa plsss

Last edited by alexandro : 06-13-2008 at 05:05 PM.
alexandro is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 04:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
Lhomme
TestMagic Guru-in-Training
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 560
Lhomme just joined TestMagic.
In C "In analyzing campaign expenditures" is correctly modifying the media which is plural( media is plural form of medium).
Rest all are awkward.
Lhomme is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 05:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
fightinghard
Within my grasp!
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 141
fightinghard just joined TestMagic.
Imo C
fightinghard is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 05:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
Kanon
Eager!
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 32
Kanon just joined TestMagic.
IMO C... media is plural (and the plural form is used in the sentence as well)
Kanon is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 05:27 PM   #6 (permalink)
scorpion.ks
TestMagic Guru-in-Training
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: India
Posts: 700
scorpion.ks just joined TestMagic.
IMO C.

In D, I find it awkward that "they have" refers to "Media analyses".
scorpion.ks is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 05:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
borntorun
Within my grasp!
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 343
borntorun just joined TestMagic.
IMO C .. media is plural ..
borntorun is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-13-2008, 05:34 PM   #8 (permalink)
sourav106
Within my grasp!
 
sourav106's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Hyderabad,India
Posts: 461
sourav106 just joined TestMagic.
Imo C
sourav106 is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-14-2008, 10:00 AM   #9 (permalink)
vinnie
Eager!
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 87
vinnie just joined TestMagic.
imo c oa pls
vinnie is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Old 06-14-2008, 10:51 AM   #10 (permalink)
faust
Within my grasp!
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: US
Posts: 108
faust just joined TestMagic.
A. Analyzing campaign expenditures, the media has had as a focus - Media is plural, it should be have instead of has

B. Analyses of campaign expenditures by the media has been focus on - same as reason above and it's in passive voice (by)

C. In analyzing campaign expenditures, the media have focused on -correct modifier and noun - verb agreement

D. Media analyses of campaign expenditures have had as a focus - it doesn't sound right

E. In their analysis of campaign expenditures, the media has been focusing on - Same reason as A and B
faust is offline  
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Google Bookmark this Post!Reddit!
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

What you can do
You cannot post new threads
You cannot post replies
You cannot post attachments
You cannot edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT. The time now is 01:02 PM.

Contact TestMagic   TestMagic Forums      Archive   

Link to TestMagic   TestMagic Locations   Legal   Privacy

Partner Sites: GMAT Sentence Correction   SAT 2400

Content Relevant URLs by vBSEO 3.0.0
Copyright © 1998-2008 TestMagic
Ad Management by RedTyger

Scroll Up