Which is better??

[amit_ace]

Robert,who is actually quite honest and not inclined to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.

Robert,who is actually quite honest and who is not inclined to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.

which is a better choice -
first A
second B

Explain with reasons.

[rockerz]

I aint any grammar expert but since A seems to convey the meaning comfortably, i dont see any need to put in 'who is' again after the and.

The first who is needed to initiate the clause but dont see it as a part of the ||ism..I m jus going wit the logic that 'if a sentence can convey the same meaning without any grammatical errors, dont add in extra words...(A) maintains ||ism, clearly identifies who we r talking abt..

Grammar experts, plz chip in ?

[amit_ace]

Rockerz I agree with you
However the OA is B

[rockerz]

saw another thread whr some discussions are going on..

Exam day, i would hve still chosen the first one...Grammar gurus..plz chip in some ideas on why it doesn't maintain ||ism or why the second one is a better option..

[agarbattis]

A is actually 2 sentences joined by the conjunction “and”. So if you re-write this sentence it will become - who is actually quite honest and who is actually quite not inclined to rob anyone – This is wrong
Whereas B fixed this issue

[chatru]

I will go with first option

Clue: Eclipse

[som200]

B. Maintains parallel structure....I choose B.
A. Produces clear meaning ...without any ambiguity..Not sure why A is Not a correct answer.