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    businesses

    Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail, the failure rate for
    businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.
    A. Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail
    B. Unlike mainstream American businesses, in which the failure rate is more than
    half
    C. Unlike mainstream American businesses, where more than half of them fail
    D. While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half
    E. While more than half of mainstream American businesses fail

    IMO E...

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    A, B and C are out i guess..
    the construction should be
    Unlike mainstream american businesses,..., Amish community busineses..xxx
    D is too awkward..

    E seems to be the best in the lot ..IMO (E)

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    I prefer E.
    A, B, C-> comparison error. D clumsy.

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