businesses

[nik_f]

Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail, the failure rate for
businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.
A. Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail
B. Unlike mainstream American businesses, in which the failure rate is more than
half
C. Unlike mainstream American businesses, where more than half of them fail
D. While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half
E. While more than half of mainstream American businesses fail

IMO E...

[rockerz]

A, B and C are out i guess..
the construction should be
Unlike mainstream american businesses,..., Amish community busineses..xxx
D is too awkward..

E seems to be the best in the lot ..IMO (E)

[Makumajon]

I prefer E.
A, B, C-> comparison error. D clumsy.

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