People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate si

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People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by any internal characteristic.

 

it's obvious to say that surroundings and situations have great impact on people's attitudes.

But one can not avoid internal characteristics. It is equally responsible to shape one's attitude.

everyone born with distinguished characteristic, which determines how a person responds in a particular situation

so it's wrong to say that internal characteristics have no influence over people's attitude.

 

nobody born with negative or positive attitudes. Attitude built during the formative stages of our life. the situations that

 

people faces make them build either negative or positive attitude.

if surrondings and immediate situations are the only factors responsible for people's attitude then most siblings will be

 

having same attitude and which is not always happen. people brought up in similar environment and surroundings might have different attitude. for example, twins who brought up in a similar environment and similar situation will not always have same attitude. one twin could be introvert and another could be extrovert. so here internal characteristic plays the major role.

 

at conclusion, the combined impact of surrounding, situation, family and internal characteristic determines people's attitude.

[pet_ra]

please review mine

 

People’s attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by any internal characteristic.

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Everything is fastening nowadays and changing with the high speed. In order to survive people have to make right decisions in a bit amount of time according to current situation and surrounded environment. Though one’s internal characteristic is never left without attention immediate data and surroundings influence mostly on people’s attitude now.

 

People around you surely influence your way of communicating, way of thinking, totally your way of life. Nevertheless one’s internal characteristic is completely changeable one may make decision sometimes which is not usual for him. I was a witness of such situation. My friend bought the dress which was not in her style at all. She was influenced on huge amount of advisors who were persuading her that the clothes matched her very much thus she agreed to buy the dress acting unnaturally comparing to her common attitude. But she has still worn this dress with much pleasure. So one is easily influenced by world around while standing against its pressure is difficultly.

 

Anyway nowadays we have no chance to have attitude mostly matched with our character as we have to do a lot of fast decisions. Many extreme situations are happening with each of contemporaries every day and there is simply no time to think seriously about them. People are using current information about happening situation and acting according to this data. A trader has no time to mind about economic movements which may happen after his decisions instead he is acting rapidly and almost immediately as like he is answering on received news.

 

Nevertheless internal characteristic is playing a key role in people’s attitude. Just remember great warrior Napoleon who didn’t want to pay attention to current situations, to surroundings, to family’s or advisor’s sentences and acted as he wanted. For example, he insisted on making his wife, Josephina, Imperators wife even they had no child and no future. Though French Imperator had attitude matched to his character he had to act according to situation then and married Austrian Princess several years later.

 

Summarizing all, current time is complicated in making decisions by your heart as a lot of situations require immediate reaction. Such extreme acts give choice to use internal characteristics sequentially to be a loser nowadays or to use current facts so to be successful. Even you have internal characteristic’s attitude, situation and world around make you to change your values and react fast using current information.

[pet_ra]

is my essay not worth to read? and review

if yes, please tell me and i appreciate this!

[bigduke]

pet, few observations

1. You need to work on your sentence construction.

2. Consolidate your thoughts rather than presenting episodic passages. Try to plan it in a way so that one para flows into the other.

 

"Everything is fastening nowadays and changing with the high speed." - paraphrase - The pace of change is very fast these days.

"make right decisions in a bit amount of time" - paraphrase - people have to make split second decisions

[pet_ra]

Thank you very much for your help!

but actually i haven't get the purpose of paraphrase- what is wrong with my phrases - do they sound unnaturally?

[swethav12]

hi pet ra

Nice essay if u can add more examples then u can score 5.5 or 6 i guess

by the way can u explain me a bit more about nepoleon

[pet_ra]

thanks guys

Josephona and Napoleon had no kids and Josephina was not very young when the question about Imperator appeared. Imperator should to have son, descendent, - the future of the country but Josephina was not that "girl" - nobody believes this- who could born the child. Napoleon and Josephina had been together a lot of years and still had no kids so family's representatives didn't believe Josephina could born a baby and so they insisted on not making her Imperator's wife. altough Napoleon followed his ambitions and claimed her his spouse officially , they broke the relationship later and Napoleon married Austrian princess to born him a son.