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Hello -- this is the first AWA I have completed. I'm feeling very stumped and hoping for any feedback or comments! Thanks you in advance -- it is so very appreciated!

 

"With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences.

 

 

 

As economic and communication advances push for more international relations, these exchanges work to the advantage of society as a whole. When two cultures are in contact, the communication and exchange of ideas is of mutual benefit. Societies can also work together to provide advancements in other areas of general knowledge, such as science and technology. Artistic quality and aesthetics can increase by influence of world cultures. Connections between countries can also help to solve world problems.

 

Better evaluation of societal practices can be accomplished when such practices are compared to the differing views of other cultures. Take, for instance, the state of public education in the United States and China. On one hand, Chinese students score significantly higher in standardized testing, particularly in the areas of math and science. The United States, however, excels in areas of problem solving, creativity, and logical application. Both societies can benefit from the study of the other’s educational system in order to make gains in the area that it is lacking. American schools, in this sense, could thoroughly evaluate schools in China in order to incorporate methods that encourage American students to score higher in math and science. Likewise, Chinese students could benefit from the inclusion of application-based learning that American students often encounter. Only through communication and observation of the other culture can this be made possible, however. Both societies can benefit from the exchange of ideas and practices.

 

Countries can also work together to advance general knowledge that is applicable and useful for the entire world. As the old adage states, “Two heads are better than one.” This idea can also transcend geographic boundaries. Take for example the scientific research laboratory CERN in Switzerland. Scientists from all over the world are invited to CERN in order to aid in scientific and technological advancements. Without the collaboration of these experts, many of the most recent advancements would not have been discovered. When experts in all fields are able to transcend political boundaries in order to collaborate strengths, the world benefits from any discoveries made.

 

The influence of other world cultures can also strengthen areas such as humanities or the arts. Take for example the world of architect Frank Lloyd Wright. Wright was exceptionally influenced by Japanese art and culture after multiple visits to the country. This influence can be seen in many of his famous works. Many other artists have experienced similar influences – musician John Lennon also to Japanese culture and artist Mary Cassett to French impressionism. Societies can benefit from the inclusion of these influences as it helps to create a more aesthetically pleasing and diverse society.

 

Lastly, some world problems require the communication and collaboration of multiple countries in order to be solved. A good example of this is the work of the United Nations. When global safety or health risks occur, the countries involved in the United Nations work together to provide solutions. Some of these solutions may include economic sanctions on uncooperative governments or aid for the impoverished. No matter the method, it is important to note that the outcome of these acts would not be as effective without the collaboration of multiple countries. In exchange, participating countries can feel assured that, should issues occur in their own country, the United Nations will be willing to offer assistance.

 

Without a doubt, countries are becoming more involved with one another due to increased globalization in areas of economics and communication. These interactions, however, are of mutual benefit to the societies of all countries involved. By working together, countries are able to evaluate their own societal practices, advance general knowledge, create a more aesthetically pleasing atmosphere, and solve worldwide problems. Without a doubt, these benefits are essential to the betterment of our world as a whole.

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