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Topic-: "There are two types laws:just and unjust.Every individual is a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws".

 

 

The civility of the people living in a society is decided by complexity of the law system .The laws are must for a society because it helps to judge those particular citizen who has committed crimes.Although in this century we can divide the laws in two categories,they are just laws and unjust laws which are basically divided on the basis of their vitality of their action on a society .The just laws should be taken seriously by individual and the unjust laws should be taken even more seriously by a society.Because unjust laws violates the independence of a individuals .

 

 

Basically, laws which are made with a perspective to harass the citizen by a ruler or government of a country are taken as unjustifiable .Laws are made by both civil government and religion head or community .And an individual is forced to follow both the laws to live to live peacefully in a society .Their are many religious laws which are unjustifiable and which are made only to suppress the minorities in a community .In past their are many laws in Hindu religion like sati pratha ,marriages of young girls , formation of caste etc, this type of laws violates right to live independently of a individuals .And, for the same reason I think this type of unjust laws which makes a individual a pariah in a society,should be seriously protested by the the citizen .Often,this type of unjust laws results into formation of unsociable individuals, who commits grave crime .In this current world we call this type of antipathy individuals terrorist and their act is called terrorism .

 

 

The main objective of laws is to maintain peace and civility of society .The individuals who commits a crime are judged by the civil judges according to the laws made by our leaders .This laws should be uniform for all citizen living in a country or society .Their should not be a case of any negligence in case of judging the criminal because in this way we are disenfranchising a wrong individual, and this can be a serious crime .So,we should keep a check on our laws in regular intervals .The laws should be made by observing the type of people living in a society .We can't impose laws on people that will be called tyrannical rule .

 

 

And on second thought we should try to educate as many people as possible .Because educating people will cause awareness among the people .The educated people will try to express themselves in a society ,This will help us to keep a track on what people wants to say or speak about .Educating people also helps us to reduce the act of criminality in a society although their are some situation where some acts are justifiable and should be judged on special conditions .Their are certain minorities in a society government should listen to their needs and act accordingly .Education also gives an individual to think about the laws, if they can understand them in a better way they can follow them easily .Their are some unjust laws made by religious head or community, now an educated individual will think before following this rules .And if he thinks that those particular rules are non justifiable then they can protest to change those unjust laws .

 

 

On the conclusion, laws are very important part of a society because it grant us to live peacefully .Although the laws which are made by religion or government on the perspective to harass the citizen should be seriously checked from time to time .The just laws are results ofa long discussion among the selected leaders and are purely made to keep a check on the individual of a society .And the unjust laws are made for exploiting the resources and individual of a society and country .So an responsible individual will seriously take a just laws but unjust laws will be taken more seriously taken and will results into long but peaceful protest to change or remove them .

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Ok overall I would give this essay a 3.5.

 

Pros

-Excellent arguments

-Bang on the Intro

 

Cons

-The third body para should condensed and could more succinct in its message.

-lots grammar issues ex-"antipathetic individuals" and the conclusion is marred by galore of them.

- Conclusion should connect to tie with the intro

-I guess u didn't proofread and were pressed for time!

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