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Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed., Issue 137(related to 3 & 35), Analytical writing, New GRE

 

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

 


Dissuading students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed is far away from have-to-do tasks of educational institutions.

Although discouraging students could better allocate education resources, release students from frustrations, and maximize possible contributions students could deliver in future, this action is not worthy.

First, education institutions get huge and vast priority tasks, while the expected returns of this kind of action is out of an issue of concern. So many problems are unsolved yet and they should mind their critical business.

Second, the false positive and true negative rates could be certainly high. Thus, for one thing, educational institute should not have students take their unreliable decision; foe the other, the risk, the estimated lost per failure guess, could be so high that education institutes can hardly cover. Would a school compensate a student for a wrong advice changing one's life? There is no such case exists.

After all, dissuading students from pursuing fields of study unlikely to succeed goes too over, and educational institute should only keep these as suggestions.

 

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