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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

 

 

The above statement contends that technology has a negative impact on human thinking and this is a kind of unfair skepticism toward technology. It seems that the statement is based on this assumption that more reliance on technology and the convenience it brings to human living would make people indolent and lazy. It is true that technology has changed human life to a great extent but most of these changes has lead to more convenience and creativity not to lack of thinking.

Technology is an integral part of life and it benefits human in many ways. The prevalence of technology in today’s world makes our lives more convenient and more productive and this can be easily felt within the boundaries of day-to-day life. every thing from cell phone to GPS and automobiles makes our life comfortable. We only can truly appreciate the merits of technology when we compare our life with that of the people in the past. The time when animals were the only means of transport, and the sad period in history that because of lack of medical equipment epidemic like cholera took the lives of thousands of people.

before the advent of technology diversified problems that people used to encounter and life hardness debilitate people and hindered them from thinking in a creative way. They were so overwhelmed with meeting their basic needs that they had little energy to come up with new ideas and concepts. How can we expect a man who has been engaged with tiresome drudgery like plowing the ground to think freely and creatively.

It is completely evident that a free mind needs a healthy,relax and unstrained body . Above remarks projects how technology has eased the living and has provided the condition necessary for a free imagination. Maslow hierarchy of needs bolster this idea strongly. According to him people are motivated to achieve certain needs. When one need is fulfilled a person seeks to fulfill the next one. Based on this important psychological theory only when people are safe and secure and their physical needs have been fulfilled they start to seek more sophisticated needs and their imagination starts to bloom.

Furthermore technological advances bring about new issues and challenges that needs to be dealt with. Addressing these issues is a great way of recuperating mind not deteriorating it. for example discovery of some high pitched devices led to discovery of efficient isolating materials. Another good example in this regard is human attempt for coming up with new and efficient ways for dumping of industrial wastes.

To sum up ,it is a narrow minded approach to consider technology as an obstacle toward thinking and vivid imagination. If this statement was true more and more technological advances which are the direct result of thinking would never had happened.As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

 

 

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