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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

 

The following analysis have been written when I gave a virtual test:

 

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To achieve a vast goal, its need a leader with cooperative manner not with competitive mode. A single person can't win a big match, its need player, supporter, and coach to win such a match. A competitive characteristic could help an individual for personal achievment, but in other hand the cooperative manner of someone will provide him a lot of supporter to attain massive target.

 

 

This world is like a sports field. To win a match here frequently, you must have the courage to help others to impose to play with you. How much bigger your team, the frequent of your win will be accelerate.

 

 

Assume the government body, this is for the wellfare of its national citizen. Does it possible to operate a government by a single individual? A government consists of several leaders including one leader among them to lead all the leaders.Does it still enough for a government to working for the country? The government have a coach, several players, but they miss supporters, the real players of the field. So, the person who is running the government must have the cooperative relationship with its other leader and citizen to ameliorate the country.

 

 

Lets consider a multinational organization now, who have a thousands of employee world wide. Neither of a such organization have run by a single person. Those organization have board of directors who have selected one among them as a CEO. CEO takes advice from the directors and directors cooperate with him/her. The employees give their support to the board and follow their decissions. Thats all have done through a cooperative manner, isn't it?

 

 

Cooperation is also very important if you want a real success in your profession. Consider a researcher who dedicated him/herself for discovering the medicine of a virulent virus attack on human. Is it really possible to him to make the job done by onseself? The researcher needs sample to examine, need some previous research result to start work with. How he could come to get those except a cooperative manner.

 

 

In the other hand competitiveness may give an individual a sudden success which should be consider as a fluke. Competiting with others no one can get the success of acme. Competition weaken the individuals with less support from all ends. It will surely diffidence the individual with lack of supporters.

 

 

So, cooperative manner in a leader is an essential part of leadership. Young people of any country should learn this from the birth and follow that till the death. It will give him the imortal value to his supporters and their young generation. So, society must engage themselves to teach their youngs with cooperation rather then competition.

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