kaushal Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 TOPIC: "A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor." ESSAY: Social obligations of every human being require that one strives to maintain a peaceful, wholesome and mutually beneficial environment around oneself. Every country across the globe ensures the safety of its citizens through laws which prevent people from causing harm to anyone else, physically, financially, psychologically or socially. Therefore any person who breaches his social contract by knowingly committing a crime must be divested of his civil rights and the right to benefit from his own labor but only if the offence was perpetrated with selfish and ulterior motives. Crimes as defined by legislative bodies and constitutions across the world encompass physical injury and harm, destruction of property, sexual abuse and even financial frauds and swindling. A person may commit a crime either for selfish and iniquitous motives or for a more wholesome goal which may require committing the crime in order to prevent something worse from happening. A plethora of cases are witnessed by us where someone is compelled to commit an offence, even as grave as murder in order to protect himself or his family. In such a scenario it is unjust to consider the perpetrator to have broken the social contract and deprive him of his fundamental civil rights. Thus, although wilfully having committed the crime the person is actually not a criminal. Other examples of such cases would include petty offences like breaking speed limits in order to rush someone seriously ill to the hospital; or even to cheat someone of his money and property only to prove later to the federal state that the victim himself was someone worthy of conviction for excessively large frauds. In such situations we observe that although the person at fault has committed a crime, the end effects are salutary and infact beneficial to the country or state. It would be very wrong to punish the delinquent in such a case because he has infact done far more good than bad and ultimately he has conscientiously committed the offence inorder to improve or atleast safeguard the state and its citizens from something far worse. However, when it is proved that a crime has been committed knowingly with selfish and ulterior motives that may be vengeance, anger, envy or monetary the criminal must be brought to book and stringent punitive measures must be taken against him. In such scenarios the maleficent does not only break his social obligation as a citizen but also endangers the fundamental rights of the victims of his offence. He is responsible to wilfully cause harm to a citizen who has been guaranteed safety physically, mentally and financially by the constitution of the country and so he is actually desecrating the sanctity of the constitution of a nation. Such an act can never and must never be forgiven, instead, it must be dealt with an iron hand in order to reduce the crime rate and discourage wrong-doers. This is where it is most condign to deprive the criminal of his civil rights like the right to vote, the right to travel freely in the country and the right to work anywhere in the country. When a person cannot respect and safeguard a fellow citizen's civil and fundamental rights he loses their benefits assured to him. Additionally he must be disallowed from savoring the benefits of his own labor because in his offence he is guilty of doing the same to the victim. It is grievous that crimes as heinous as rape and murder are committed and that the rate of these offences is not checked adequately even in developed countries, thus it is not only suitable but also necessary to take rigid steps against the perpetrators as described above. Exceptions to the above possibilities must not be overlooked wherein criminals though having consciously committed the offence, are not liable to such severe punishments because they suffer from mental or psychological diseases e.g. depression, split personality, etc.. Here, the only way to deal with the criminal is treatment and rehabilitation. All the points discussed above can only be judiciously employed to decrease crime rates and discourage criminals if the decisions taken regarding an offence are fair and just. It must never happen that a person who was compelled to perpetrate an offence to safeguard something or someone valuable or prevent something worse from happening is punished undeservedly. Only when people who are really culpable are punished will the proposition stated earlier be a commendable solution. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agcr1 Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 I think it's really good. For me, a nonnative reader, the essay losses some clarity after the third paragraph. But it is OK. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaushal Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 Thanks agcr1..where do you think I can improve as in content, vocabulary, style, grammar, examples, reasoning..which area do you think I need to work on further? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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