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Write about the following topic:
In many cities crime is increasing.
Why do you think this happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


---------Nowadays annual crime commitment rates are higher than ever. Even wealthy countries such as the USA, the United Kingdom cannot stop such increase. The growth of population, poverty, unemployment, have a huge impact on raising crime number. In this essay I will consider the major reasons of such situation and present my suggestions.
----------Firstly, the major reason for murder, mugging or robbery is money. It is even said that money make the world spin. Of course, inevitable growth of human population also effect overall felony trend. The more people country has, the harder is for governments to ensure better life. The increase of poverty and unemployment is a fatal combination and leads country to following moral setback. On the other hand, it is not only authorities fault, because citizens their selves make mistakes and bad things happen. Child birth in poor families is also rapidly growing and people should think about it. Is this the future we want for next generations?
----------In my opinion, authorities must introduce one child policy for poor families as in China. This may seem that governments interfere into social community life, however no other options are visible. Furthermore, the governments should increase the number of policeman as this would create more workplaces and decline the number of crime commitment. The introduction of similar projects definitely would not only improve life of people but even country's economy may jump into higher level, so both sides would make a profit.
----------An instant actions must be taken, in order to prevent upcoming disastrous consequences. The decrease of such rapid growth of human population is a must and therefore people ought to start thinking of future, because it is we who create the base for following generations.