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A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you knowledge or experience. Write at list 250 words.
Some people say that making a lot of money is a key of being a successful person. On other hands, others believe money does not mean "success" because the word "success" has a another definition for them.
My point of view is I do not support the idea of being rich is to be a successful person.
Firstly, for me a prosperous person is the person who have money, a great job, happy family, but, at the same time, all these impacts could bring a help to lives of people. There is a good example concerning this issue. As well known, the princess of Saudi Arabia is Amira Al-Taweel who is the wife of the richest man in the world. She and her husband have found a foundation of women equal rights in Saudi Arabia. She's demanding a equality between women and man with the ways to employ a lot of women, given an opportunity to drive, has sent them abroad to be educated. For this reason, I could call exactly this kind of a successful person who is able to give the chances to help people to build a civil society.
Although, there is another side if this challenge, Obviously, money also could play an important role in the lives of people, If you managed to help people to realize their dreams into reality there is no doubts that you need a great support behind you and money. Therefore, money is not just about having a negative feature, but, also it is a measurement of the definition of success such as the tool to achieve some goals, aspirations and desires.
I believe that each factor influences on some situations. Money and willingness to benefit could have both impacts to develop our society at the right direction. In the same way, it depends on how to use its properly.
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