I think your score is great. According to what you've said, you need 250, and will be happy with that, right? I should remind everybody here that the TOEFL is NOT an intelligence test, it is only a test of how much you've learned. Most people could continue studying forever and get a 300 over and over again, right? Many people in our group have studied English almost their whole lives, and naturally receive higher scores. Other people, on the other hand, have not studied English so intensively, so it's to be expected that their scores will not be as high.
You got one of the hardest TOEFL topics, but I'm sure that you will rise to the occasion!! From the work you've shown here in the groups, writing is perhaps your strong point, and I was always impressed with both your reasoning and your writing.
I think your points are great!! In fact, off the top of my head, I'd say that those are the two main points for that essay topic. So you can get some sleep tonight!!
Great work, cinderella. Take a rest for a while, you deserve it. I hope that you will let us know when you get your final score and also keep in touch from time to time to let us know where you're going to study.
I think I speak for everybody when I say it was truly a pleasure to have you work with us.
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