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    Is this sentence proper? If not, how can I rewrite it?

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    Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university.


    ​Thanks so much guys!

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    Re: Is this sentence proper? If not, how can I rewrite it?

    Quote Originally Posted by CEOSandeep View Post
    Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university.


    ​Thanks so much guys!
    It's okay; sounds very generic--your statement could apply to literally any university. Furthermore, you don't say what those values are--they could be values that encourage success over ethics or vice versa.

    At least change the verb tense: 'I'm interested in the values I will gain'
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