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1. Jupiter is a gaseous planet with an atmosphere composed most of hydrogen and helium.

 

2. Challotte Perkins Gilman is known primarily as an author of short stories, but she also wrote an influential book argued for equal economic opportunities for women.

 

3.Each year millions of tons of fertile topsoil that could produce good crops washed away by rains.

 

 

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1. Jupiter (is) a gaseous planet (with) an atmosphere composed (most) of hydrogen (and) helium.

 

'most' should be 'mostly'

 

2. Challotte Perkins Gilman is known (primarily) as an author (of short) stories, but she also wrote an influential (book argued) for (equal) economic opportunities for women.

 

'book argued' should be 'book that argued', 'book which argued' or 'book arguing'

 

3.(Each year) millions (of tons) of fertile topsoil (that) could produce good crops (washed) away by rains.

 

'washed' should be preceded by 'is' because passive voice is used

 

 

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Originally posted by learn_to_success

 

 

 

2. with "equal economic opportunities" we have "adj + adj + noun", so I think "equal" should be change to "equally" because it stand before an adj.????

 

thanks

 

Here "Equal" modifies for "opportunities" so we need adj, not adv. Good luck

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