evaluate my reading passage

[itsammy003]

Q1)What type of reading do you enjoy most? Give specific reasons to support your response




My response:-


In my opinion reading novels gives more enjoyment than any other.I used to read novels because it not only gives enjoyment and excitement , but also enhances our reading skill. Some times novels show a great change in our life.After novels I would prefer to read magazines and news papers.Because those are helpful to stay our contact with the outside world.I can conceive that magazines would be of any use regarding to knowledge.

Generally students are always busy with there academics.If they keep on doing there work with books of them they will definitely vexed sometime .To make work enjoyable one should read novels and news papers because reading novels and news papers definitely relieves us from stress.
One cant achieve there goal without proper knowledge of the outside world .Our academics will not give a complete knowledge about that because of every day updates in the world .To learn these missing things and also other political and non political things every one should read news paper.

So I myself always recommended novels and magazines as a best reading materials because its not only ameliorate my skills but also give a lot of enjoyment and entertainment.

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In my opinion, reading novels gives more enjoyment (YOU MIGHT SAY "IS MORE ENJOYABLE") than any other KIND OF READING. [] READING NOVELS not only PROVIDES enjoyment [] but also enhances [] reading skillS. IN ADDITION, novels SOMETIMES CAN BRING ABOUT a great change in our LIVES. After novels, I [] prefer to read newspapers because THEY help US to stay CONNECTED with the outside world.

Generally students are always busy with THEIR academics. (SPACE SHOULD COME AFTER PERIOD.) If they keep on [] READING TEXTbooks WITHOUT EVER TAKING A BREAK they will definitely BECOME OVERWORKED. To make LIFE enjoyable, one should read novels and newspapers because reading novels and news papers definitely relieves us from stress.
One canNOT achieve HIS OR HER goalS without proper knowledge of the outside world. Our academics CANnot give US complete knowledge because of CURRENT EVENTS THAT HAPPEN every day in the world. To learn ABOUT these EVENTS and also other political and non political ISSUES, everyone should read THE newspaper.

So I myself always recommend[] novels and NEWSPAPERS as [] THE best reading materials. Not only DOES READING NOVELS ameliorate my skills but IT also giveS
ME a lot of enjoyment. NEWSPAPERS CAN BE RELAXING TO READ AS WELL AND THEY ALSO KEEP US ABREAST OF CURRENT EVENTS IN THE WORLD.