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pharmacy215 · 2009 July 14th, 03:59 AM

What type of reading do you enjoy most? Give specific reasons to support your response

In my opinion, News papers and magazines give more enjoyment and excitement than any other reading material. News paper provides current news and in this way, makes us updated with current news of our surroundings.
News papers contain information about classified, real estate, matrimonial and current events and programmes in your community and in all over the world. These are very useful information and very essential in everyone’s life. As we know that it is very useful and beneficial for those who are looking for car, home or partner. Sometime it is very effective and quick method for business networking.

Moreover, News papers and magazines are the material which is easily available everywhere at office, home and also available at library at free of cost. In my city, some of them are available at intersection so you can pick up in early morning on your way to office. Most of us find them very essential part of life. Some of the news and articles are very exciting and also very interesting which makes you so curious to read them again and again. Many columns in news papers and magazines are very popular for their contents.

Additionally, these are the reading materials which you can read it anywhere in bus, at home, on internet or at library. News papers and magazines are very old kind of reading materials and also very popular from many years and I believe it will be everlasting popular material for next generation too. Undoubtedly, it is important part of everyone’s life

At last, I for one love to read them regularly and morning without news paper is like morning without coffee.

legume09 · 2009 July 15th, 04:43 PM

Your essay has a lot of ideas but i think it will be better if you reoganise it. For example, in paragraph 3, the main point is that newspaper is available everywhere but the three last sentences in this paragraphs don't support the main point at all. I think you should put there three sentences into another paragraph.
And i think you should change your conclusion paragraphs, too.
I'm also studying for the toelf ibt. It's just my own opinion. Hope it will help.

2009 July 14th, 03:59 AM	#1 (permalink)
pharmacy215 Eager! Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 37	again please give me comments.thanks in advance.need help to improve my writing skill What type of reading do you enjoy most? Give specific reasons to support your response In my opinion, News papers and magazines give more enjoyment and excitement than any other reading material. News paper provides current news and in this way, makes us updated with current news of our surroundings. News papers contain information about classified, real estate, matrimonial and current events and programmes in your community and in all over the world. These are very useful information and very essential in everyone’s life. As we know that it is very useful and beneficial for those who are looking for car, home or partner. Sometime it is very effective and quick method for business networking. Moreover, News papers and magazines are the material which is easily available everywhere at office, home and also available at library at free of cost. In my city, some of them are available at intersection so you can pick up in early morning on your way to office. Most of us find them very essential part of life. Some of the news and articles are very exciting and also very interesting which makes you so curious to read them again and again. Many columns in news papers and magazines are very popular for their contents. Additionally, these are the reading materials which you can read it anywhere in bus, at home, on internet or at library. News papers and magazines are very old kind of reading materials and also very popular from many years and I believe it will be everlasting popular material for next generation too. Undoubtedly, it is important part of everyone’s life At last, I for one love to read them regularly and morning without news paper is like morning without coffee.

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2009 July 15th, 04:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
legume09 I JUST got here. Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 8	Your essay has a lot of ideas but i think it will be better if you reoganise it. For example, in paragraph 3, the main point is that newspaper is available everywhere but the three last sentences in this paragraphs don't support the main point at all. I think you should put there three sentences into another paragraph. And i think you should change your conclusion paragraphs, too. I'm also studying for the toelf ibt. It's just my own opinion. Hope it will help.

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