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i think THIS forum not enough because maybe you need to wait 3 days to get help
these time i will write daily essays i need to know about the progress i will do
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.but I need just someone to grade me in writing section and speaking section , He just gives some directions and the email quite enough for that I mean I will send my essays and my mp3 speaking by email to grade them and direct me just , I am willing to pay 20 dollars for a month do you accept , this replay for you or any teacher will accept that, I wait your answer today , because my test on 24th February.
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I do not need correction, this is essay for TOEFL, I need someone to grade it , please Mr, Tino grade my essay.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Coaches are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question is do you agree or disagree about being the coaches the best teachers, the answer will differ from people to another people, I think the coaches are not the best teachers because they care about money more than the student's advantage, they do not fear of the punishment, because there is not supervision to him, and they do not have certified skills, I will explain my reasons.
first they care about mony so much because they agree with the student for money not anything else, but on the other hand, the teachers will not care about money because they will take their money from the school as monthly salary, I remember some story hapenned to me when I was in my intermediate school, I agreed with some coache to teach me mathimatics, but after the agreement, he phoned me the next day and told me I can not teach you because I my schedule disallow, I was angry and what increased my anger that I knew after one week that the coach agreed with an other student because that student paid money more much than me.
Second, the coach will not be afraid of you, he can cheat you in the information, he can cancel his agreement like what happend with me and he can delay the class, because he know you can not go to his manager like what you do in a school.
Third, you can not trust in those coaches because most of them do not have a certificate, consequently,they can not explain the subject like the teachers, we know the teachers can not become a teacher without passing many exams, I think this enough to prefer the teachers to the coaches.
As I have illustrated, the teachers better than the coaches one thousand time, for your advantage do not go to the coaches, they will take your money and wast your time as a result you will be the loser, do you want to be a loser.
If the question was - Do you agree with the following statement: Coaches are the best teachers... then I think you missed the task, as the meaning of coaches here in American English is the people who coach sports, except when used with certain modifiers, like a "language coach". You have discussed the difference between school teachers and private tutors. Yet, this is kind of vague as a question and I doubt this would be a TOEFL Writing task. Anyway, I would rate your response a 2/4 (being generous), and it could also get a 1/4 keeping to the ETS Rubric of not understanding or responding directly to the task.
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Look. If you are only looking for a score, you could send it to me. Skype: learn.english2. I will send you a score based on the writing. If you want classes, we can do that to. However, I will not correc tthe essay nor will I give any advice. If that sounds good, let me know.
As for the essay, I would score it a 2/4. I agree with that score. Too many mistakes in grammar to give it a higher score. However, your development and organization is on a good track
Last edited by ESymposia; 02-22-2012 at 02:10 PM. Reason: didn't see the essay.
I'm a bit confused... Two posters here (MAndrew and ESymposia), whom I believe are both TOEFL teachers/tutors, have stated that your essay would earn a 2/4 according to the TOEFL writing rubric. However, both essays on the iBT are scored on a 5-point rubric. Am I missing something (or are we talking about speaking and not writing)?????
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