Please help me evaluate my essay

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Different people will give different responses to this statement on from their own characters and educational backgrounds. Some people agree with this statement because they think this pets or animals like to anyone must be treated. For example if this animal or pets not treated may be this animal transfer the diseases to the family members, for that must be this animal treated like family members. in addition to transfer diseases, these animals help us for a lot of things, if this animal not healthy these animal can not do these things for that must be these pets treated like family members.
On the other hand, Some people disagree with this statement because they think there are a lot of people such as women, men and children need these treatments. In the other words, these people need the money or costs for treated from the diseases, some time these people have not money for treatment, for that must be gave this money or treatment to these people because these people very important in comparison with these animals. Also, if these people can not able to treat maybe these diseases transfer to us by any way.
When it come to me, I agree with this statement because these animals very important for us. We use these animals for a lot of work such as entertainments and other purposes for that pets or animals should be treated like family members. For instance, if you have a cat, and this cat have one disease, you have three option first, you can let this cat without treated, second, you can exchange this cat with another and third, you can treated this cat. I think the first and the second option are wrong because these solutions are dangerous for you and you family, but the third solution is better.

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