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123. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?


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Here is my first essay. I'd be glad to hear your comments.[goodjob]

 

123. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

 

 

 

Reading books is very important to educate ourselves, to find the truth, to learn things and share our knowledge. There are different sorts of books. Books can be based on real events, real people and established facts. Others can provide the information about the art, music, and painting or tell the fantasy stories and fascinating tales from our wonder world. I think that people should read different sorts of books for the following reasons.

 

In the books one can find almost everything he/she is searching about. Books are the huge world of knowledge, facts, real people, our history, present and future, our dreams and fantasies. It is necessary to read about established facts so that we know exactly about what had happened in the past and what’s going on in the present. It is also good to give some time for our spirit needs.

 

Nowadays people are busy and stressed. We are crowded with lots of information: not only with books about facts, but also with the news in the papers and on television. Sometimes we become tired of the facts. Many times one searches to escape from the real world, leave the stress that he/she faces every day and dive into the sea of books. Books can not only provide us with real information, but also can help to relax and liberate our imagination and creativity.

 

Reading the fantasy stories one can find his/her dream world that it was never possible to realize and was never found in the established facts. It can make one to wonder about his hidden spiritual world and the wonderland of our imagination. Reading book about beauty, arts or music one can find creativity and give the time to express oneself.

 

Thus I believe that reading only those books that are about real events, real people and established facts can make our lecture much more boring and tiresome. There are lots of other good books that can let us relax and escape from the daily stress, nourish our spirituality and stimulate the creativity and imagination.

 

 

 

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Your introduction paragraph does not make it clear whether you agree or disagree on the given topic !

 

A good template is:

 

1st para: restate the topic / or express your agreement/disagreement. The first sentence is very important. Support with a few examples.

 

2nd, 3rd, 4th: elaborate on each example.

 

5th: summarize and conclude.

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