#2 Parents are the best teachers.

[bee]

Hello everybody!
This is my first attempt to write something. I will be thankful if you let me know your opinion regarding my essay.
Thanks in advance!:o

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Many people think that parents are the best teachers. They put forward several reasons why it is so. And these arguments are above criticism. I can only share their opinion.
Parents first and foremost know their child better than someone else. They know his interests, capabilities, and behavior, consequently, they can decide in which way it is worth to develop their child.
Secondly, children imprint the behavior of their parents since childhood it works on the instinctive level. Simply put, how you regard people, nature, how you resolve problems, all of it is felt by your child. You are a pattern for him!
Thirdly, the main reason why the best teachers are parents is that you wanted your baby; you help him to become, unlike you, healthier, more successful and happier. Each parents desire to see their child on the top of life.
In sum, a word must be said about our responsibility to children. We have to love, regard and help our children, and future, in the words of wisdom, will not toss a stone to you.

[bee]

Hi, again!
I figure out that we all are very busy, but you can only mark from 1 to 6.
Thanks!

[Erin]

Estimated score: ~3.0/6.0

Your essay has good writing, but it is too short!

[bee]

Thanks a lot, Erin!![heartbeat]