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sarrah e · 2009 September 12th, 09:24 AM

thanks alot for this useful thread

pinky786 · 2009 September 14th, 08:38 PM

Hi Notefull!

Thanks for your comments on my essay. You have asked if you can post my essay on your website. My question is do we get the free access to your site so that we can read your comments on our essays or do we have to buy the package to get privilage to use your website.

Thanks in advance for your time.

notefull · 2009 September 16th, 02:00 AM

Pinky,

I'm happy that you found the comments helpful. And, yes: you do get free access. I'm sorry that I haven't sent you the link yet. I will post the link here in the next few days for your essay and another.

Always happy to help,
Joseph

pinky786 · 2009 September 16th, 03:36 AM

Hi Joseph,

Thankyou so much for your reply and I am looking forward to hear from you pretty soon. You are doing a great job, helping so many people and keepirg the spirit of giving back alive. We all appreciate your help.

GOD BLESS you in everyway and may all your dreams comes true.

pinky786

pinky786 · 2009 September 21st, 10:37 PM

Hi Joseph,

Still waiting for your reply. Just wondering when you'll be able to post the link for essays.

Thanks.

legume09 · 2009 September 22nd, 08:35 AM

Hi noteful, can you read and help to evaluate my essay on the following topic:
College and university education should be available to all students or should be available only to good students. Discuss the view. Which view do you agree with. Explain why.

Here is my essay:

No one can deny the importance of education. Education help us to gain sufficient knowledge to succeed in life and to live well in this booming world of information and technology. Education also contributes a lot to the development of a country. However, from my point of view, it is not necessary to let college or university education be opened to all students, in fact, only qualified students should get admission to universities or colleges.

The first reason for my opinion is for the own good of the students. In high schools, students are informed with basic and general knowledge but in colleges or universities, the knowledge will be much more in depth and a lot more difficult to grasp. So when unqualified students still have opportunities to attend universities, they will have to struggle really hard to past tests and exams. And if they fail, the results will be even more detrimental, these students may end up losing faith in themselves or being forced to leave universities in the middle of their study despite all the money, time and effort they have put in it.

Secondly, from my observation, the target of many high school students is getting admission to universities or colleges. If university and college education is available to any students then many of them won't be motivated and won't try their best to study many subjects which will the the foundation for the knowledge that they will study later . And the consequence of that is a lot of students will face more difficulties studying at universities or colleges.

My third reason is that when college or university education be opened to all students, the number of students will increase. We all know that college or university education is very costly so if a country does not have enough fund or resources, an increased number of university students may result in a decline in the quality of education. In this case, both the students and the country will suffer.

Last but not least, a bachelor degree is and important indicator in the job market of many countries, my country is one example. If a large number of applicants have bachelor degrees then it will be harder for recruitment staff to sort out the qualified applicant for a job position. This will also lead to an even more competitive job market.

To sum up, although education is an important part of human life and is the foundation for the prosperity of a country, college and university education should not be available to all students because this may put a lot of pressure on unqualified students as well as on the education system and on the job market.

dnqtvn · 2009 September 22nd, 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pinky786

Hi Joseph,

Still waiting for your reply. Just wondering when you'll be able to post the link for essays.

Thanks.

Joseph, I am having a same question to you. I haven't yet received any link from you. Waiting for your reply. Thank you.

notefull · 2009 September 23rd, 08:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dnqtvn

Joseph, I am having a same question to you. I haven't yet received any link from you. Waiting for your reply. Thank you.

I know you're waiting. I'm sorry about the delay, but I'm creating a special page on my website for your essays. It's taking a little more time than I thought. I will finish by Friday. Don't worry; after I get the page up and running the reviews will come faster and I'll do it more often.

Thanks for your patience

Always happy to help,
NoteFull

P.S. I'm also developing a speaking help page to help with one of the speaking questions in the same way this page helps with writing.

dnqtvn · 2009 September 26th, 05:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by notefull

I know you're waiting. I'm sorry about the delay, but I'm creating a special page on my website for your essays. It's taking a little more time than I thought. I will finish by Friday. Don't worry; after I get the page up and running the reviews will come faster and I'll do it more often.

Thanks for your patience

Always happy to help,
NoteFull

P.S. I'm also developing a speaking help page to help with one of the speaking questions in the same way this page helps with writing.

Thank you, Joseph! I hope all best to your website and life. I am looking forward to visiting your website soon.

notefull · 2009 September 27th, 02:35 AM

Well, the first phase of the section for writing is up. I plan to make some improvements within the next week. Here are the links:

I tried to post the links but it wouldn't work because I don't have enough posts, so here are the instructions:

Go to notefull dot com and click on writing help. Pinky your essay is titled example 2 and dnqtvn your essay is titled example 1.

Legume, your feedback is coming soon.

Thanks for your patience. I evaluated your grammar and structure in full detail. Let me know if you have any suggestions to make the feedback more helpful and KEEP THOSE ESSAYS COMING!

Always here to help,
Joseph

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2009 September 12th, 09:24 AM	#11 (permalink)
sarrah e Student Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: my home Posts: 3	thanks alot for this useful thread

2009 September 14th, 08:38 PM	#12 (permalink)
pinky786 Within my grasp! Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 355	Hi Notefull! Thanks for your comments on my essay. You have asked if you can post my essay on your website. My question is do we get the free access to your site so that we can read your comments on our essays or do we have to buy the package to get privilage to use your website. Thanks in advance for your time.

2009 September 16th, 02:00 AM	#13 (permalink)
notefull TOEFL helper Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 9	Pinky, I'm happy that you found the comments helpful. And, yes: you do get free access. I'm sorry that I haven't sent you the link yet. I will post the link here in the next few days for your essay and another. Always happy to help, Joseph

2009 September 16th, 03:36 AM	#14 (permalink)
pinky786 Within my grasp! Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 355	Hi Joseph, Thankyou so much for your reply and I am looking forward to hear from you pretty soon. You are doing a great job, helping so many people and keepirg the spirit of giving back alive. We all appreciate your help. GOD BLESS you in everyway and may all your dreams comes true. pinky786

2009 September 21st, 10:37 PM	#15 (permalink)
pinky786 Within my grasp! Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 355	Hi Joseph, Still waiting for your reply. Just wondering when you'll be able to post the link for essays. Thanks.

2009 September 22nd, 08:35 AM	#16 (permalink)
legume09 I JUST got here. Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 8	Hi noteful, can you read and help to evaluate my essay on the following topic: College and university education should be available to all students or should be available only to good students. Discuss the view. Which view do you agree with. Explain why. Here is my essay: No one can deny the importance of education. Education help us to gain sufficient knowledge to succeed in life and to live well in this booming world of information and technology. Education also contributes a lot to the development of a country. However, from my point of view, it is not necessary to let college or university education be opened to all students, in fact, only qualified students should get admission to universities or colleges. The first reason for my opinion is for the own good of the students. In high schools, students are informed with basic and general knowledge but in colleges or universities, the knowledge will be much more in depth and a lot more difficult to grasp. So when unqualified students still have opportunities to attend universities, they will have to struggle really hard to past tests and exams. And if they fail, the results will be even more detrimental, these students may end up losing faith in themselves or being forced to leave universities in the middle of their study despite all the money, time and effort they have put in it. Secondly, from my observation, the target of many high school students is getting admission to universities or colleges. If university and college education is available to any students then many of them won't be motivated and won't try their best to study many subjects which will the the foundation for the knowledge that they will study later . And the consequence of that is a lot of students will face more difficulties studying at universities or colleges. My third reason is that when college or university education be opened to all students, the number of students will increase. We all know that college or university education is very costly so if a country does not have enough fund or resources, an increased number of university students may result in a decline in the quality of education. In this case, both the students and the country will suffer. Last but not least, a bachelor degree is and important indicator in the job market of many countries, my country is one example. If a large number of applicants have bachelor degrees then it will be harder for recruitment staff to sort out the qualified applicant for a job position. This will also lead to an even more competitive job market. To sum up, although education is an important part of human life and is the foundation for the prosperity of a country, college and university education should not be available to all students because this may put a lot of pressure on unqualified students as well as on the education system and on the job market.

2009 September 27th, 02:35 AM	#20 (permalink)
notefull TOEFL helper Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 9	Well, the first phase of the section for writing is up. I plan to make some improvements within the next week. Here are the links: I tried to post the links but it wouldn't work because I don't have enough posts, so here are the instructions: Go to notefull dot com and click on writing help. Pinky your essay is titled example 2 and dnqtvn your essay is titled example 1. Legume, your feedback is coming soon. Thanks for your patience. I evaluated your grammar and structure in full detail. Let me know if you have any suggestions to make the feedback more helpful and KEEP THOSE ESSAYS COMING! Always here to help, Joseph

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