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here is my version of the essay:Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
School is a place where students spend most of their time, so it should provide a lot of facilities to improve their well-being and broaden knowledge. To reach that goal I would suggest some equipment for my school if I received some money. For improving the well-being of the students, I would buy some gym and sports equipment, and for broaden knowledge, I would provide some new computers with the high speed Internet connection.
Physical activities are very important for students to vent out mental stress, cope up with school environment, and concentrate in studies. Some students leave their families and stay by themselves. Some do extra work after school to pay for the tuition. Those are the situation where students get stressed out. By doing physical activities, it is somewhat possible to reduce those stresses. In addition, healthy body means healthy mind. Thus, healthy mind helps students to focus more on studies. My school has a gym. However, it is not well equipped. If I could add some exercise tools to it, more students will get the opportunity to use the gym. For example, in our old gym it has only two trade mills and one elliptical. With the gifted money, I would buy two more trade mills and elliptical.
There are only two very old modeled computers in our library without any internet connection. Therefore, the students are not able to connect to the rest of the world. In current situation, where advanced technology is a must have facility, our school is lagging behind. The students are dependent on old paper based information, whereas internet can provide all essential information in a matter of few seconds. Moreover, there are no limitations of acquiring knowledge though the internet. Therefore, new computers with high speed internet connection would be my second choice on spending money.
In conclusion, certainly, there must be other areas where the school need money, but it is very important to emphasize on students physical health and facilitate acquired knowledge. Consequently, in my opinion, money should go on those two sectors in my school.