I am not good enough to evaluate your essay, but your essay is really great!!!
In short essay, you organized in a logical way, and I have learned a lot dude! When I read more than twice, I realized your strong essay structure makes me speechless. I couldn°Įt try any critics for your beautiful essay.
Why I liked your essay is because ..........
*** As a reader,
1] Even though, the first sentence of thy introduction looks an agreement essay, you made it for a comparison essay. So it is called "starting with the opposite idea.°Ī Your second sentence started with the opposite view against the topic sentence.
°įMany people will probably agree the childhood is the best time of one's life. ---> But not every childhood is happy °¶ °į
2] Your body paragraphs explained with strong supports that are like °¶ you tried experiments in hypothesis ways (which is one of good to build thy essay).
°į Why is childhood the best stage of one's life? Let's consider common circumstances.°Ī
3] Actually your conclusion is my favorite part of your essay. You made it short, even though you can explain longer why you agreed. You answered your agreement in your body paragraph so that readers can read your essay again. And you closed your last sentence perfectly.
°įOne can't chose where he or she will be born.°Ī
Yes everybody will agree it!
Mike, I would like to read your more essays, Please keep on good work!