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    Airplanes - changed a lot in our life

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    0036 Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives. automobiles bicycles airplanes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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    Progress never stops and people invent more complicated and faster transportation vehicles. Every vehicle changes people's lives so that they can reach their destination and transport heavy loads quickly, safer and easier. In my opinion, one of the most important transportation vehicles, planes changed our lives drastically.

    Firstly, planes can transport people and things far away very rapidly. It means more interactions between nations occur. Nowadays one can make business not only in one country but also internationally with the help of airplanes. Having breakfast with your partner in one country you can easily take a flight and have a dinner with you r companions in another country.

    Secondly, while having two weeks of vacation people can travel to distant countries and return in time for their jobs. International tourism flourishes due to planes and more people get to know about other countries. For example, students can work and travel across the
    United States in their summer vacation. If not by planes they wouldn’t have such opportunity.

    Finally, planes can deliver almost anything very fast so that many problems may be solved. For example, when Russian had problem with taking submarine off the bottom of the sea, English specialists with their machines could get the location in just a few hours and save peoples' lives. Moreover, when Tsunami in
    Indian Ocean made many casualties whole world could send food and first supply by planes.

    In conclusion, I would say that planes changed our lives dramatically as there isn't any problem now concerning transportation of people and loads far away in short time.

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    there are some grammar mistakes.u have strong points in it. But would be better if u clarify why not other vehicles giving example and comparing with the past situation.may be 4.5

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