what are some of the qualities of a good parent?

[santana]

What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.


Parents have an important responsibilities during children progsess so they must be have good qualities such as a good listener, a good provider, and a good model. I would like to explain these points in the following way.

To begin with, when children grow up, they have many problems and they want to share their problem with friends or parents. So parents should listen their children because ıf they behave insensitively when children want to talk about their problems, ıt may cause permanent damage over children. For example, they do not share school problems with parents anymore or they may deal with problems in a bad way.

Next, another quality parents should have is that they should provide some things for children like clothes, food and shelter. Untill children earn their own money, a good parent should provide these needs for children.

Additionally, the last quality is that parents should be good model for children. For example, they should not smoke cigarete, drink and use bad words around children otherwise children can take parens their model and can have bad habits.

So based on all the above metioned point, ı think parents posses some good qualities to be good parents. Three of the most important are being good listener, good provider and good model. Children grow up their parents and their qualities affect children’s future life.

[ouranous]

Your ideas are good but inadequatedly developed, I find too many grammatical mistakes in your essay, though.

[hfk]

not bad, but, yes, more grammar mistakes make your rate lower.

[santana]

thank you for your comments
can somebody show my garammatical mistakes?
take care
santana

[ouranous]

Parents have an important responsibilities during children progsess so they must be have good qualities such as a good listener, a good provider, and a good model. I would like to explain these points in the following way.

To begin with, when children grow up, they have many problems and they want to share their problem with friends or parents. So parents should listen their children because ıf they behave insensitively when children want to talk about their problems, ıt may cause permanent damage over children. For example, they do not share school problems with parents anymore or they may deal with problems in a bad way.

Next, another quality parents should have is that they should provide some things for children like (provide their children with such things as) clothes, food and shelter. Untill children earn their own money, a good parent should provide these needs for children.

Additionally, the last quality is that parents should be good model for children. For example, they should not smoke cigarete, drink(what?) and use bad words around children otherwise children can take parens (as) their model and can have bad habits.

So based on all the above metioned point, ı think parents posses some good qualities to be good parents. Three of the most important are being good listener, good provider and good model. Children grow up their parents (what do you mean??) and their qualities affect children’s future life

[santana]

thank you ouranous,
take care
santana