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A good school teacher makes a difference in every student’s life in a way they’ll remember them for their life time. The school teacher should possess some important qualities in order to call him a good teacher. First and foremost is he should have good teaching skills and he should know how to teach his students in an effective manner. If a school teacher has good teaching skills every student would love to attend his class. In my experience , when I was doing my 12th grade we used to wait for Zoology classes as my zoology teacher taught us very nicely in a way it helped us to gain good marks.
Secondly, a good teacher should be able to communicate well, understand the needs of the students.
He should be approachable in a friendly manner. For example, if a student gets any doubt in his subject obviously he will go to a good teacher who is friendly, certainly not with the rough teacher.
My third point is more valuable for a good teacher that is humour. Humour means a lot to school going children. Students can very well understand the topic if a teacher teaches with a little bit of humour. Students will be more attentive and they can grasp well.
Impartiality or neutral to everybody irrespective of student’s knowledge is another important quality a good teacher should possess. I have heard from people that there are teachers showing partiality. For example if a student is bright they are lenient in some ways but not the same with dull students.
The last one is a good teacher should have good manners and good dressing sense. He should maintain his character out side of the school. A teacher who has all these qualities can be called as a good school teacher and he can be a role model for many.