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Topic 97:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

 

 

Teachers play an extremely important role in imparting education to students. They are the moulders of the future of students. I agree that the abilities of a teacher must be judged in accordance with the learning rate of their students and that they should be paid accordingly.

 

Teachers play an active role in the lives of students as they spend most of their time with them. When a student is admitted to a school he is a seed which has to be grown into a tree and teachers are responsible for that. It is entirely upon the abilities of the teachers to invoke interest among the students about the subject they teach. For eg. a teacher adopting the stratergy of playing games and puzzles in class related to subject can derive the students interest towards the subject.

 

Paying teachers according to how much their students learn is a good metric on which the ability of a teacher can be judged. A person may be good at a subject but if he is unable to pass on the knowledge he can't be called a good teacher. Not every student is good at each subject but by culminating interest a teacher can make a student to excel in a field or atleast make him study it. Taking an example any teacher would not want to be paid less and the fact that knowledge can't be forced also makes the teacher to apply more efforts in teaching.

 

The judging criteria can be a test of students taken by a third party which reflects the efforts put in by the teacher in teaching the subject based on what students gained from the hours spent in class learning the subject. Knowing that such a thing will happen even the teachers will tend to work harder in making the students learn more which is an indirect benifit to the students too.

 

To conclude i would stress that such a system should be put into practice so that the quality of education imparted improves overall and the standard of teaching is maintained. Education is a noble cause and this would help in spreading the light of knowledge in a better way.

 

 

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Hi Mystery Man =),

 

Excellent job, excluding the minor typos here and there. You should paste the essay into Word and check the spelling first before post it here. That will make the essay look much better.

 

As usual, the arguments are very clear and logical. In this case, you didn't arrange it in the sequence of reason 1 - reason 2 - reason 3, but the whole essay is still very much understandable and comprehensible.

 

A 6.0-/6.0 from me.

 

All the best,

 

Phuong

 

Topic 97:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

 

 

Teachers play an extremely important role in imparting education to students. They are the moulders of the future of students. I agree that the abilities of a teacher must be judged in accordance with the learning rate of their students and that they should be paid accordingly.

 

Teachers play an active role in the lives of students as they spend most of their time with them. When a student is admitted to a school he is a seed which has to be grown into a tree and teachers are responsible for that. It is entirely upon the abilities of the teachers to invoke interest among the students about the subject they teach. For eg. a teacher adopting the stratergy of playing games and puzzles in class related to subject can derive the students interest towards the subject.

 

Paying teachers according to how much their students learn is a good metric on which the ability of a teacher can be judged. A person may be good at a subject but if he is unable to pass on the knowledge he can't be called a good teacher. Not every student is good at each subject but by culminating interest a teacher can make a student to excel in a field or atleast make him study it. Taking an example any teacher would not want to be paid less and the fact that knowledge can't be forced also makes the teacher to apply more efforts in teaching.

 

The judging criteria can be a test of students taken by a third party which reflects the efforts put in by the teacher in teaching the subject based on what students gained from the hours spent in class learning the subject. Knowing that such a thing will happen even the teachers will tend to work harder in making the students learn more which is an indirect benifit to the students too.

 

To conclude i would stress that such a system should be put into practice so that the quality of education imparted improves overall and the standard of teaching is maintained. Education is a noble cause and this would help in spreading the light of knowledge in a better way.

 

 

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