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sadcat · 08-18-2008, 07:19 PM

2) Although many people like to work by hands, I prefer to work with the help of machines because machines work fast. They are accurate and precise. They are economical.

First, machines are fast. They can work quicker than hands. For example, in a pharmaceutical industry, a syrup filling machine fills more than hundred bottles in a minute. It is impossible for a man to fill hundred bottles with syrup by hand in one minute. Another example is that I can not write fifty invitations by hand in five minutes. On the other hand with the help of a photocopier, I will need to write only once and then get the rest of photocopies of that invitation. Machines save more time as compare to hand work.

Second, machines work neatly as compare to hand work. I do not worry about the quality of my work when I work with the help of machines. For example, a tablet machine, in a pharmaceutical industry, makes all the tablets of uniform size and of uniform quantity of ingredients. It is not possible for a person to make small tablets with precision and accuracy. A machine can do work perfectly as compare to a man.

Third, machines are very economical. A machine can do the work of dozens of labors. For example, a machine can put five hundred caps on jam jars in a minute. If an industry do not have that machine then it will need fifty more labors to do the same work . The company will pay every labor for his work. Where as a machine needs only a single person supervision. Therefore, an industry, with a machine, will pay only one labor instead of fifty labors and in this way money will be saved. Machines save more money as compare to handwork.

In conclusion, in my opinion, we should work with machines because the work with the machines is fast, neat and economic.

sadcat · 08-19-2008, 04:34 PM

3) You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own room mate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

If my university ask me to share my dormitory room with another student then I would prefer to choose my room mate myself because when I will choose one of my class fellow or a friend to share my room then she will be helpful in my studies. We will live comfortably with each other. We will be straight forward with each other.

Firstly, when a class fellow become my room mate then it will be very helpful for my studies .Being study in the same class, we will have almost same kind of homework to do. We will probably be able to help each other in weak areas of study. For example, I am not good in math, however, one of my class fellow is very good in math but she does not have clear concepts of biology. When we will live together then I could get help from her for math and she could get help from me in biology projects. However, if a university will choose a room mate for me from another class then she would not help me that much in my studies. A room mate of my own choice will be a great help in my studies.

Secondly, When I choose my class fellow to share a room with me then we will live more comfortably with each other. Because we belong to a same age group, we will probably have same interests. For instance, we will like to go to watch a movie in a cinema or we will like to go to do some shopping on weekends. However, my university would not assign me a room mate of my age group and we may not have same hobbies. If I pick somebody to share my room then we will share same interests to enjoy life.

Thirdly, when I share my dormitory room with my friend, I will not hesitate to say her about the things which I do not like. For example, I am a very neat and clean person and I like to live as an organized way. However, If my friend is messy then I will ask her frankly to clean it. In case of a stranger room mate, it will be difficult for me to ask to clean the room. It is hard to share the room with university assigned stranger room mate. If I do not like any attitude of my room sharing friend then I will easily tell her without any hesitation.

In conclusion, I will like to choose my room mate of my choice in a university dormitory because we will help each other in studies. We will have same hobbies. We will be straight forward to eachother.

sadcat · 08-20-2008, 05:21 AM

4) Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I think, it is inappropriate to ask school students to evaluate their teachers. The students would not mature enough to access their teachers. They would favor the teachers of their own choice. The respect of the teachers will be decreased in front of students.

Firstly, schools should not ask their students to evaluate their teachers because they would have immature thinking. They will see their own comfort before giving their views about a teacher. For example, If a teacher gives more homework than another teacher, most of the students will possibly be like the teacher who will give them lesser homework. They will not aware about the disadvantages of it. They will only think about their enjoyment time. Students should not be asked to evaluate their teachers because they would not aware of importance of education.

Secondly, school students should not be asked to access their teachers because they will give good views about their favorite teachers who would not have good teaching abilities. Many students impress by the physical appearance of their teachers. For example, I used to like one of my school teacher in my primary school. She was not a good teacher but I like her way of dressing. Due to her appearance, I overview her weaknesses in teaching and told everybody that she was a very good teacher. Students do not evaluate their teachers on the basis of their way of teaching. They would give their views on the basis of other characteristics of a teacher.

Thirdly, a school should not ask their students to evaluate their teachers because the respect of the teachers will be decrease in front of children. When the students will know that their teacher has good reputation due to their good remarks, they will feel dominating. This will reduce the respect of a teacher in front of the pupil. For example, when children will come to know that he will decided about the career of their teacher, they will be proud of it . Maybe they will also disobey their teacher.

In conclusion, School students should not evaluated their teachers because they have immature thinking. They can be dishonest. It also decreases the respect of a teachers in front of pupil.

sadcat · 08-22-2008, 03:18 AM

I am waiting guys!!!!

hather · 08-22-2008, 10:10 PM

Some minor mistakes, remaining is good

2) Although many people like to work by hands, I prefer to work with the help of machines because machines work fast. They are accurate and precise. They are economical.

First (firstly), machines are fast. They can work quicker than hands. For example, in a pharmaceutical industry, a syrup filling machine fills more than hundred bottles in a minute. It is impossible for a man to fill hundred bottles with syrup by hand in one minute. Another example is that I can not write fifty invitations by hand in five minutes. On the other hand with the help of a photocopier, I( have to write)will need to write only once and then get the rest of photocopies of that invitation. Machines save more time as compare to hand work.

SecondlySecond, machines work neatly as compare to hand work. I do not worry about the quality of my work when I work with the help of machines. For example, a tablet machine, in a pharmaceutical industry, makes all the tablets of uniform size and of uniform quantity of ingredients. It is not possible for a person to make small tablets with precision and accuracy. A machine can do work perfectly as compare to a man.

Thirdly Third, machines are very economical. A machine can do the work of dozens of labors. For example, a machine can put five hundred caps on jam jars in a minute. If an industry do not have that machine then it will need fifty more labors to do the same work . The company will pay every labor for his work. Where as a machine needs only a single person for supervision. Therefore, an industry, with a machine, will pay only one labor instead of fifty labors and in this way money will be saved. Machines save more money as compare to handwork.

In conclusion, in my opinion, we should work with the machines because the work with the machines is fast, neat and economic.

08-18-2008, 07:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
sadcat Eager! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: U.S.A Posts: 77	please rate my essay and tell me my mistakes 2) Although many people like to work by hands, I prefer to work with the help of machines because machines work fast. They are accurate and precise. They are economical. First, machines are fast. They can work quicker than hands. For example, in a pharmaceutical industry, a syrup filling machine fills more than hundred bottles in a minute. It is impossible for a man to fill hundred bottles with syrup by hand in one minute. Another example is that I can not write fifty invitations by hand in five minutes. On the other hand with the help of a photocopier, I will need to write only once and then get the rest of photocopies of that invitation. Machines save more time as compare to hand work. Second, machines work neatly as compare to hand work. I do not worry about the quality of my work when I work with the help of machines. For example, a tablet machine, in a pharmaceutical industry, makes all the tablets of uniform size and of uniform quantity of ingredients. It is not possible for a person to make small tablets with precision and accuracy. A machine can do work perfectly as compare to a man. Third, machines are very economical. A machine can do the work of dozens of labors. For example, a machine can put five hundred caps on jam jars in a minute. If an industry do not have that machine then it will need fifty more labors to do the same work . The company will pay every labor for his work. Where as a machine needs only a single person supervision. Therefore, an industry, with a machine, will pay only one labor instead of fifty labors and in this way money will be saved. Machines save more money as compare to handwork. In conclusion, in my opinion, we should work with machines because the work with the machines is fast, neat and economic.

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08-19-2008, 04:34 PM	#2 (permalink)
sadcat Eager! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: U.S.A Posts: 77	3) You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own room mate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. If my university ask me to share my dormitory room with another student then I would prefer to choose my room mate myself because when I will choose one of my class fellow or a friend to share my room then she will be helpful in my studies. We will live comfortably with each other. We will be straight forward with each other. Firstly, when a class fellow become my room mate then it will be very helpful for my studies .Being study in the same class, we will have almost same kind of homework to do. We will probably be able to help each other in weak areas of study. For example, I am not good in math, however, one of my class fellow is very good in math but she does not have clear concepts of biology. When we will live together then I could get help from her for math and she could get help from me in biology projects. However, if a university will choose a room mate for me from another class then she would not help me that much in my studies. A room mate of my own choice will be a great help in my studies. Secondly, When I choose my class fellow to share a room with me then we will live more comfortably with each other. Because we belong to a same age group, we will probably have same interests. For instance, we will like to go to watch a movie in a cinema or we will like to go to do some shopping on weekends. However, my university would not assign me a room mate of my age group and we may not have same hobbies. If I pick somebody to share my room then we will share same interests to enjoy life. Thirdly, when I share my dormitory room with my friend, I will not hesitate to say her about the things which I do not like. For example, I am a very neat and clean person and I like to live as an organized way. However, If my friend is messy then I will ask her frankly to clean it. In case of a stranger room mate, it will be difficult for me to ask to clean the room. It is hard to share the room with university assigned stranger room mate. If I do not like any attitude of my room sharing friend then I will easily tell her without any hesitation. In conclusion, I will like to choose my room mate of my choice in a university dormitory because we will help each other in studies. We will have same hobbies. We will be straight forward to eachother.

08-20-2008, 05:21 AM	#3 (permalink)
sadcat Eager! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: U.S.A Posts: 77	4) Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I think, it is inappropriate to ask school students to evaluate their teachers. The students would not mature enough to access their teachers. They would favor the teachers of their own choice. The respect of the teachers will be decreased in front of students. Firstly, schools should not ask their students to evaluate their teachers because they would have immature thinking. They will see their own comfort before giving their views about a teacher. For example, If a teacher gives more homework than another teacher, most of the students will possibly be like the teacher who will give them lesser homework. They will not aware about the disadvantages of it. They will only think about their enjoyment time. Students should not be asked to evaluate their teachers because they would not aware of importance of education. Secondly, school students should not be asked to access their teachers because they will give good views about their favorite teachers who would not have good teaching abilities. Many students impress by the physical appearance of their teachers. For example, I used to like one of my school teacher in my primary school. She was not a good teacher but I like her way of dressing. Due to her appearance, I overview her weaknesses in teaching and told everybody that she was a very good teacher. Students do not evaluate their teachers on the basis of their way of teaching. They would give their views on the basis of other characteristics of a teacher. Thirdly, a school should not ask their students to evaluate their teachers because the respect of the teachers will be decrease in front of children. When the students will know that their teacher has good reputation due to their good remarks, they will feel dominating. This will reduce the respect of a teacher in front of the pupil. For example, when children will come to know that he will decided about the career of their teacher, they will be proud of it . Maybe they will also disobey their teacher. In conclusion, School students should not evaluated their teachers because they have immature thinking. They can be dishonest. It also decreases the respect of a teachers in front of pupil.

08-22-2008, 03:18 AM	#4 (permalink)
sadcat Eager! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: U.S.A Posts: 77	I am waiting guys!!!!

08-22-2008, 10:10 PM	#5 (permalink)
hather Trying to make mom and pop proud Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 19	Some minor mistakes, remaining is good 2) Although many people like to work by hands, I prefer to work with the help of machines because machines work fast. They are accurate and precise. They are economical. First (firstly), machines are fast. They can work quicker than hands. For example, in a pharmaceutical industry, a syrup filling machine fills more than hundred bottles in a minute. It is impossible for a man to fill hundred bottles with syrup by hand in one minute. Another example is that I can not write fifty invitations by hand in five minutes. On the other hand with the help of a photocopier, I( have to write)will need to write only once and then get the rest of photocopies of that invitation. Machines save more time as compare to hand work. SecondlySecond, machines work neatly as compare to hand work. I do not worry about the quality of my work when I work with the help of machines. For example, a tablet machine, in a pharmaceutical industry, makes all the tablets of uniform size and of uniform quantity of ingredients. It is not possible for a person to make small tablets with precision and accuracy. A machine can do work perfectly as compare to a man. Thirdly Third, machines are very economical. A machine can do the work of dozens of labors. For example, a machine can put five hundred caps on jam jars in a minute. If an industry do not have that machine then it will need fifty more labors to do the same work . The company will pay every labor for his work. Where as a machine needs only a single person for supervision. Therefore, an industry, with a machine, will pay only one labor instead of fifty labors and in this way money will be saved. Machines save more money as compare to handwork. In conclusion, in my opinion, we should work with the machines because the work with the machines is fast, neat and economic.

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