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gastropoda
07-26-2008, 08:39 AM
http://www.urch.com/forums/gre-analysis-issue/95493-issue-13-waiting-your-advice-thanks.html

I have post my essay here but i havent receive the resopnse.

maybe people are busy doing their own business

So, could anyone here have a look at my essay and give me some advice.

Thanks a lot!

Marwan2010
11-03-2008, 07:13 PM
looks pretty solid and has a good pattern