[revised]Issue Topic:Planning courses vs students' interests
Please comment on my writng, any comment is appreciated.Thanks.
Here is topics and my writing.
Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestion of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason