doforumda Posted October 25, 2012 Share Posted October 25, 2012 (edited) Hi I wrote a report based on IELTS task one. Please check my report and give me feedback if it is worth of 7 bands. Please use the scale from 0 to 5. 0 means less than 5 bands, 1 means 5 bands, 2 means 5.5 bands, 3 means 6 bands, four means 7 bands and 5 means more than 7 bands. Here is the picture of the graph on which I wrote my report. http://www.www.urch.com/forums/attachments/ielts/6576-need-check-my-writing-task-one-ielts-g37.gif Here is my report ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ The bar graph shows how the fertility rate of Arab nations changed over a period of 1990 to 2000. It can be clearly seen that there are slight differences in fertility rate of several of Arab nations. According to the graph, In 1990, Oman and Saudi Arabia had the highest number of fertility rate with Oman(7) leading the chart and Saudi Arabia(6.7) on the second place. The fertility rate of Qatar was 4.2 and that of UAE was 4.1 both could be ranked at third and fourth respectively. Following two nations(Bahrain and Kuwait) are at fifth with identical rate of 3.5. In 2000, Oman and Saudi Arabia both stood at the top of the chart but with reduced rate of 5.5 each. Qatar(3.5) and UAE(2.9) on second and third respectively which is followed by Kuwait(2.8). Bahrain ended up at the bottom of the graph with figures 2.5. In conclusion, we can see that fertility rate of all Arab nations fertility rate reduced moderately with the passage of time. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Thank you in advance. Edited October 26, 2012 by doforumda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doforumda Posted October 26, 2012 Author Share Posted October 26, 2012 This forum seems to be very slow one. I normally uses stackoverflow for help but they don't have tags for ielts and english. Please help me out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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