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    Recent research shows that the consumption of junk food is a major factor in poor diet and that it is detrimental to health. Some people believe that better health education is the answer to this problem, but others disagree. What is your opinion???

    It is generally acknowledged that food has given the world a large number of benefits and provide us a huge amount of energy. However, there is a damaging to health comes from the food cannot avoid it without take care about our health. In my opinion, I agree that it is very important to teaching the people about food and their health by, for example, healthcare systems. Therefore, this easy will discuss the effect of unhealthy food on the health of the people.
    On the first side of the argument there are people who argue that healthcare by education systems is best way to teaching people to take their attention about their health . For example, government should ban advertising of bad food on television and promotion a good health. Also, it can do that by producing a handbook which has advices about a healthy food. In addition, it can educate the children in schools to avoid unhealthy food because this kind of food can cause many kinds of diseases, for instance, fatness or obesity, overweight, hurt heart, blood procure, and cancer.
    On the other hand ,there are people who believe that it is not necessary to teaching people about unhealthy food because they believe that all people know what is the junk food mean. Moreover, it is very cheap and inexpensive ,also they can find it at anywhere. In addition, they think that a little from junk food will not cause diseases , Also they think that there are anther ways to keep their health like exercises, for example, running very morning is a good to keep their health.
    In conclusion, however, it is not doubtful that the health education of people has a great deal of problem, so, the answer, I think lays somewhere in the middle. To put it a different way, provided that the government should address the magnitude of this massive problem and its underlying the causes, they can make a significant different.

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    Animals' rights and the use of animals for food or research (discuss the both views)


    Nowadays, animals are used not only as a source of food, which is generally assepted, but also in scientific research. The number of studies using animals grows faster. Hence, in the last decades, the animals' rigths have been discussed.
    The human kind is a apex predador in Earth, so, to use other animals in our alimentation is the part of our nature. Some people can exclude meal, fish, milk and eggs from their food habits, but the vegeterian diet should be supplemented with vitamins and protein complex which extracted from animal tissue. Due to the biological dependence of humans there is no way to exclude animals from our diet. Although, we can decrease the consume of meal and fish, adapting our food habits to our real needs. In the developed countries there are millions of pounds of meal which are transformed in garbage unnecessary. The better management of food distribution and consume will save thousants of animals every year.
    In the other side, many animals are killed during scientific experiments. The laboratorian animals, as mice or rabbits, are largery used by pharmaceutical companies, universities and researh groups in order to test new drugs or cosmetics. Maybe, some of this expeeiments are useless and there is no need of sacrify living being. The use of animals in science and industry show be allowed only if there is no other solution to certify the safenessn of medical drug or treatment. All animals are living beings, with the right to live and they do not deserve to suffer.
    Therefore, our society cannot live without using animals in food, but we can reduce the consume of meal in one side and avoid the criminoua murdern living beings. If we assume that animals are alive, as we are, and act in the ethical way, we will save millions of animals.

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    rite about the following topic:
    Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance?
    Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    Write at least 250 words.


    Some people hold the opinion that a common man should have free
    access to art galleries and museums; others, however disagree and
    think it should be available on cost so that artists are helped financially.

    The first group, who are in favour of cost-free entry to
    art related entertainments, say that it is the basic right of every citizen
    to have access to national museums because it depicts history of a nation.
    Further, they stress encouraging people to participate in
    art exhibitions is kind of healthy activity. Lastly as more people suffer from
    financial problems now-a-days; so it is not advisable to impose
    charges as it would significantly reduce the number of visitors.

    However, there is other group who has strong feelings that it is not
    wise to have free entries. Firstly, it would not help the art in general,
    and the artists particularly. The artists must have a stable source of
    income as to support themselves. The same thing applies to museums
    as it must generate revenue in order to support its various costs and
    without an income source it is hard to sustain it very self. Lastly, they
    argue that it will generate a sense of recognition and importance in
    a common man as some thing done as paid is usually worthy.

    In conclusion, i suggest an awareness needs to be created among general
    public about financial aspect of entry fees and they should be persuaded
    to pay as they enter. This money is necessary for art to live and progress.

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    The flow chart shows that, hiring process at large corporation for the permanent post. The step involved in the process of selecting candidates described below.
    In the first step candidates must submit their resume or curriculum vita to the company. After successful completion of the submission process job seeker will go for attend the initial qualifying interview round, in this round recruiters wants a minimum qualification from the candidates (ex. B.E, B.Tech)
    Recruiters will select who achieved a minimum qualification and rest of them eliminated. The candidates who achieved a minimum qualification they were go for next round that is aptitude test. In the test recruiters want to know about the candidates how much he or she having the skills, the reason behind this test candidate who were in the post they should have a minimum skill when he or she work with under pressure. The candidates who were pass in the test they will go to next round remaining candidates eliminated means not employed.
    The candidates who were appeared and pass the test they must start work in probation of six months, in this period candidates get more information about the work and other hand recruiters get a chance to how much candidate have the capability of work. After successful completion of six months recruiters gave reference they were posted in permanent employed

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    Hello, everybody. This is my first effort of writing an essay for IELTS. Could you, please check and estimate?

    One day oil and gas reserve will run out. The research for alternative energy sources like wind, solar, water power, burning waste are causing as much environmental damage as nuclear power sources they are intended to replace. How far do you agree to this statement? What possible benefits do the alternative sources bring OR what damage they cause.

    In the argument, the author states that in some time the worldís entrails will not be able to provide humanity with oil and gas. Therefore, people need to find alternative energy sources. Nevertheless, the envitomental concerns of the researches for renewable energy sources are as acute as those of using nuclear power. However, if we take a closer look itíll become apparent that the author has not taken into consideration some aspects of both using nuclear power and the researching for renewable energy sources, which has lead to a number of mistaken assumptions.
    The use of nuclear power energy can not only be dangerous for environment itself but directly for people. The nuclear disaster happened in Chernobyl in 1986 can be considered the largest catasrophy of the 20th century. The health state of people living in the polluted areas is still being worsen. The death rate along with the frequency of cyroid gland cancer among children and women has considerably increased. And more than that, the results of this disaster will undoubtedly be shown on future generations because of the aggravated geen pool. In contrast, harnessing of wind, solar and water powers can be beneficial to society causing much less harm to people.
    Besides, renewable energy provides not only safety, but also independence for countiesí economies. In essence, being available everywhere, wind turbines are now being installed in most of the European countries making them idpependent from gas imports.
    More than that, the problem of oil and gas reserves running out still worries people. Certainly, they are not endless and some day we will need to face up to this fact. However, if we sit hands down waiting for this day to come we will definetely be at a loss to know what to do then. Instead, renewable energy gives us a mean to be prepared.
    On the other hand, the dangers of researches for renewable energy resources canít be neglected. Armenia is still suffering great losses because of the widespread use of water power stations. It causes water pollution and changes the climate as well as the whole ecosystem.
    In conclusion, the argument contains several logical flaws that should be taken into account. Furthermore, there is not enough data to proove the allegation. The essay gives a complete overview of the risks involved in both using of nuclear power stations and renewable energy sources.

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    please grade my ielts essay

    Good afternoon,
    Could someone specialised in the IELTS exam be so kind in order to grade my essay?

    The topic sounds like that:
    ,,Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
    To what extent do you agree or disagree?,,

    Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about themes like social equality, discrimination and, more important, the ways to reconciliate such manifestations.
    I think we should look into the past first. In ancient times, only man had acces to education, and this because man had the phyzical power back then. I consider this to be one of the biggest mistakes human kind had ever made, so let s not repeat it! In consequence, I trully believe that there should not exist any difference in the criteria of acceptance cor females and males, not only at a university, but everywhere.
    On the other hand, accepting equal numbers of females and males at the university and having fair criteria of admission are two totally different things. I say that because a fair selection is a selection with ni discriminations from either males or females. In orther to do that, the better prepared people should be accepted, let s say, at the university, even if this means that all of them are male or female.
    Another opinion is that females should have a larger number of places at the university than males in order to compensate the delay the had in the past and encourage them for the future.
    In conclusion, I believe that the fairness which should characterize the admission process at an academic institution should be related to the past performances, not to the race, gender or any other things.


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    Topic: Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that it is a good thingwhile others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

    There is an increasing trend that young people are holding many vital positions in the authority. While it can be argued that this is a negative tendency, I believe that the benefits would outweigh the drawbacks.

    There are several reasons why people saying that young people holding important positions is detrimental. The young people are often assumed that do not have many experiences and understanding as the elderly. Sometimes they can not hold their temper and will have elated decisions, which may affect the whole system. Since politics is a complex environment that requires those involved to have ingenious management over circumstances. This is something that the young ones lack of and need more time to watch-and-learn.

    Despite the argument above, I believe that young politicians' contributions will have more of beneficial impacts. Firstly, this workforce will be newly graduated, their knowledge are up-to-date and their ideas are close to the needs of young generation citizens. Secondly, these young people will still have a whole future ahead so that they can follow and be responsible for their long-term projects or ideas, while the older people might need to retire soon. In addition, who would be more energetic and enthusiastic than the young people. These people get engage in the government system are normally have strong will and are full of spirits to help develop their country.

    In conclusion, the young politicians might be elated in national decisions, yet their effective contributions will help the government to control the country better.

    Word: 250

    Thank you!

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    There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the national music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?


    Nowadays various types of music are existed around the world. Depends on increasing different types of music, one question comes into mind that why we are demanding it? And is National music more preference than international one that have being all over the world? To answer these questions weíd better to concentrate on each types of music individually. Iím interested in both of them. I have many memorable things with traditional music and in contrast I make many friends with international music, so Iím interested in both of them
    We listen to the music with various tensions, itís completely related to our spiritual condition, and obviously reveal our aspect, for example in sorrow condition we ought to listen to the calm and sad music or in other hand in celebs we desire to listen joyful music, therefore itís completely related to our psych.
    national music exhibit traditional of a country and itís a way to scatter their culture out to the other nationalities, itís calmative music that retain culture and customs from one age to another, for example Irish music. Nowadays all over the words get familiar with their ceremonies and culture because they spread it by their traditional music.
    In other hand international music as pop music is a general music which everyone around the world at least listen to ten number of it. The fan of this kind of music is greater because all universes have one thing in common together and itís international music. This kind of music close people together they can communicate and debate together.
    In conclusion, we need music in our lifestyle. We can be fresh with it. We find many friend so people close together by music.

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    You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic:

    Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.
    Do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.


    You should write at least 250 words.


    This is really tough because lots of parameters involved in. yes, the character of everybody made on their childhood and mainly during their students. Therefore they can get more effects from their friends sometimes more than family, their point of view to the life is starting from that time and honestly I think friends are more important in this situation.
    Students stay together at least 6 hours per day and sometimes they are in touch together after school time, they feel comfort together sometimes more than family and here is the point.

    I believe family should take care of children by helping them to find the best possible character and point of view to the life, to better understand and deal with environment and challenges. Off course family can be more effective if you make positive environment for students, means all environment character is close together and trying to make positive progress and ideas.
    If you don’t care of school environment then sometimes you have to fight with negative ideas coming from disruptive school students, we are not always powerful in such a challenges because sometimes we don’t have enough time to spend with our children.

    The point is, if we don’t have enough money to change the school then we have to supervise our children and friends behavior and warn them in case needed, spend more time together to be effective, understand each other feeling and trying to give them enough space to make small mistakes, and so on …
    Even you choose better available schools again you have to do above mentioned procedure but with less pressure and conerns.

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    Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens?



    Nowadays some people believes that wealthy nations must share their properties with poorer nations that canít provide things as food or education, but on the contrary, the other consider that this huge responsibilities should be tackle by their government not other wealthy nations.

    Iím completely agree with first group who consider other wealthy nations shouldn't overlook the poorer nations , itís totally related to human-being and we should condolence and sympathy with others by providing them such a background as providing education chance. We should assist some nations that face with some disasters such as famine, drought, earthquake and etc. itís just a way to express our sympathy.

    The better way is improving education, they can construct their country by themselves so one way is to enhancing education and have a chance for leading at least a small region, so they have enough enthusiasm to improve their country, and if in one country people get progress no one try to immigrate to other countries and stay to his mother country beside his relatives, so I want to say that immigration is leave poor situation and just go to developed country.

    Therefore if other wealthy nations help poorer one, they can avoid many hazards after that and also improve their life level. In other hand they can stop immigration and stay on their home country and build it. So with this approach, world become more beautiful and people get close to each other by helping each other.

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